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Summer Nights

Laying on the ground
wish upon a stars twinkle.
Gentle breeze captures
the way his lips touch mine
 we kiss under the moon light.


Cory long
7-11-2011
Tanka You contest

Copyright © Cory Long | Year Posted 2011

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July 18, 2011 at 11:29 AM

Beautiful Tanka, Cory Many congrats on your HM. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2011 at 10:17 AM

Congratulations on your win Cory in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol

July 17, 2011 at 5:51 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Cory

July 17, 2011 at 1:06 PM

Very romantic..Congrats..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 16, 2011 at 9:51 PM

Congrats cory on your HM in Summer Nights luv with this lovely entry ..sweetly penned my friend..enjoy special honor ...

Francine Roberts

July 16, 2011 at 9:23 PM

congrats Cory on your Honorable Mention in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

July 14, 2011 at 9:03 PM

This is precious.It's a bit like my tanka! I think many people went the "romantic route!" Luv ,Andrea

July 13, 2011 at 6:26 AM

Soup mail for you...what a fantastic read, especially since you wrote it on my birthday...xoxo

July 12, 2011 at 2:38 PM

Lovely tender piece, Cory

July 12, 2011 at 8:37 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Oh What A Night..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 12, 2011 at 7:24 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest with this wonderful poem Cory. Love, Carol

July 11, 2011 at 10:00 PM

sewtnesss all the way, cory.. what a fine piece with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

July 11, 2011 at 6:39 PM

Nicely done. This conjures up images of lazy Summer nights under the stars. God Bless, JB

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2011 at 5:42 PM

Nice.. I will find a spot on that ground.. and than enjoy the stats only.. romantic poem... Take care,.. p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 11, 2011 at 5:18 PM

oh so very pretty cory and so romantic my friend.. good luck in the contest with these lovely summer night lines luv..

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