Summer Nights

The smell of the summer night air 
Takes me back to times we shared
You and I dancing beneath the moon
Crickets playing a lovers tune

Trees full with lush green leaves
Whispering poetry to you and me
A view from beneath a Missouri bluff
Talking of passion, love, and lust

Your hand in mine strolling the path
Sitting on the deck and looking back
Picnic tables and barbecue grills
Driving and parking, is this for real?

My memory’s filled with your sweet love
Do you remember that snow white dove?
A kiss goodnight under a star filled sky
Best friends forever, a promise, no lie

It excites me to think that every year
Whether life or memory I return here
We will create magic again I know
On a summer night in the moon’s soft glow

 
Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend





*inspired by John Heck’s “Summer Celebration” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Docherty Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 7:14 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on being a winner in Johns contest, a lovely written piece...kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
Winter Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 6:52 AM
Warmest congrats on your most beautiful and well deserved win in John's contest! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 12:35 AM
Congrats on your success in John's contest Lolita. Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 6:10 PM
This was so lovely....a great winning poem! Congratulations, Lena!
Higgins Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 12:45 PM
Congrats
Ehigiator Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 6:10 PM
Simply Breathtaking, Such beautiful memories to have made with someone special...Ah love is definitely in the air. "A kiss goodnight under a star filled sky"...So romantic and peaceful...Summer is indeed Magical....Gorgeous poem..God Bless and Best Wishes Always, Tyesha
Herzog Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 7:37 AM
Dear Lena: Such a romantic, love filled poem. Right from your heart. Thnaks fro reading my poem. I'm so very glad you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
Parish Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 11:03 PM
Absolutely beautiful...Excellent write Lena
Strand Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 1:16 AM
Best wishes Lolita with this one.Rgds Brian & hanks for your welcome comments
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 12:18 AM
A delightful piece Lena! ...full of lovely imagery and tender sentiment. Well done my dear! Best wishes, Keith
Moreno Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 11:35 PM
Excellent work Lolita, "Trees full with lush green leaves Whispering poetry to you and me" Nice lines. I left you some soup mail...Raul
Ginn Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 5:29 PM
So beautifully simple and innocent. I love the line,,,whether life or memory. Hold on to the memories.
Chircop Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 1:42 PM
beautifully done,and re;coment-thanks for your support sweet friend
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April 2, 2009 at 1:08 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Sounds like a wonderful memory. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good day. Karen
Shango Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 12:39 PM
That beautiful point you return to in your history of recovery is where I cry fromthe rim. Thanks for your comment. We who dot the Caribbean shore lives on the rime of its basin where we trade, love, and rage against all prophecy of death. And this poem of yours celebrates that, for sweet memories forbid us to die. Peace and Love, my friend, Lena
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April 2, 2009 at 9:47 AM
A magical summer night is created in this imagery-filled poem, Lolita! Love the way you return each year to relive the passion of "a summer night in the full moon's glow." Good luck in the contest!
Reinke Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 8:35 AM
wow this is really nice, sweet filled with imagery. I can smell the nights sweet air. thank you for reading my work. cat
Docherty Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 7:46 AM
Beautiful and yet sad write. Very visual and delightful to have shared. Great job poet!
Winter Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Ah, so beautiful. Enchanting imagery capturing the memory of sweet love. A winning poem. Good luck! Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 6:00 AM
I just read your comments and you had me smiling.. that is very wonderful of you..really, really appreciate that. Thanks.
Higgins Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 5:49 AM
Wonderful writing..the love flows through this piece sweetly..best wishes in the contest.
George   Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 1:42 AM
Lovely! lainie
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 12:47 AM
Very nice quatrain....and images of love well painted. Good luck in the contest.
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