Summer Night Up North

Summer Night
 Sven, my best friend, had a motor boat, we`re young 
and invited two girls with us it was a summer night we 
had a cold beer, Sven who looked like an actor got 
the best-looking girl
I wore glasses had to do with Sven`s girlfriend`s friend.
We fished for crabs at the black mountain that
dropped straight into the fjord and had no shoreline 
 we caught some and went to 
a small island lit a fire to cook them, 
I remember the light of the night it was not dark
but azure yet without the moon 
it must have been in June.
 I sat dreaming it was the contrasting blue that absorbed me.
My friend who had dark wavy hair had gone into 
the bushes with his girl and I sat beside a sad woman 
who like me felt rejected
I held around her tried to kiss her, but she refused,
 and that was ok; I was here for the summer night 
smoked cigarettes that glowed like ephemeral cats hunting rats 
when I inhaled a lungful of Turkish tobacco, 
 drank more beer and waited for dawn
that in Norway was and is what poetry is made of.
As for the girl she had fallen asleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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