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Summer Minions

an army prepares for battle I share my picnic 5/21/2016 Summer 3 Contest

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Date: 6/9/2016 2:50:00 PM

Love the title Lukas, it compliments the poem well.

Date: 5/30/2016 2:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placing, Lukas! You did not much of a choice in sharing! Good write... David

Date: 5/28/2016 4:34:00 PM

amusing, clever little haiku - congrats on your win in andrea's contest!

Date: 5/28/2016 9:48:00 AM

Very clever Lukas lol congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 5/28/2016 9:08:00 AM

The invasion begins, congratulations Lukas, cleverly conceived...

Date: 5/27/2016 9:03:00 PM

this is so freaking clever!! At first I did not get it, but reading it the second time, I LOVED it. Congrats for your well deserved win.

Date: 5/27/2016 8:36:00 PM

clever and original...congrats Lukas

Date: 5/27/2016 7:27:00 PM

I love this Lukas...it has that aha moment! Congrats on your well deserved second place win! #7. ; )

Date: 5/27/2016 1:53:00 PM

Love it! Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice

Date: 5/27/2016 12:20:00 PM

Clever! Congrats. BG

Date: 5/27/2016 10:24:00 AM

Great Haiku, Lukas. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Date: 5/27/2016 9:39:00 AM

An excellent haiku, Lukas! Great image you project! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Date: 5/21/2016 4:28:00 PM

Oohoohoo! Grudgingly we share but not if we can help it. Great write that made me smile. A seven and thanks for the giggle. God Bless, JB

Date: 5/21/2016 10:39:00 AM

Ants are clever fellows, they even look after the elderly and the sick of their community. Nice write Lukas.