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Summer Minions

an army
                    prepares for battle
                     I share my picnic


5/21/2016
Summer 3 Contest

caregivingearthfoodinsectnaturehaiku

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James Inman

June 9, 2016 at 2:50 PM

Love the title Lukas, it compliments the poem well.

David De La Croes

May 30, 2016 at 2:02 AM

Congratulations on your placing, Lukas! You did not much of a choice in sharing! Good write... David

Charlotte Puddifoot

May 28, 2016 at 4:34 PM

amusing, clever little haiku - congrats on your win in andrea's contest!

Jan Allison

May 28, 2016 at 9:48 AM

Very clever Lukas lol congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

May 28, 2016 at 9:08 AM

The invasion begins, congratulations Lukas, cleverly conceived...

Andrea Dietrich

May 27, 2016 at 9:03 PM

this is so freaking clever!! At first I did not get it, but reading it the second time, I LOVED it. Congrats for your well deserved win.

David Mohn

May 27, 2016 at 8:36 PM

clever and original...congrats Lukas

Connie Marcum Wong

May 27, 2016 at 7:27 PM

I love this Lukas...it has that aha moment! Congrats on your well deserved second place win! #7. ; )

Janice Canerdy

May 27, 2016 at 1:53 PM

Love it! Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice

Barbara Gorelick

May 27, 2016 at 12:20 PM

Clever! Congrats. BG

Sandra Haight

May 27, 2016 at 10:24 AM

Great Haiku, Lukas. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Paul Callus

May 27, 2016 at 9:39 AM

An excellent haiku, Lukas! Great image you project! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Judy Ball

May 21, 2016 at 4:28 PM

Oohoohoo! Grudgingly we share but not if we can help it. Great write that made me smile. A seven and thanks for the giggle. God Bless, JB

Lenny Gazbowski

May 21, 2016 at 10:39 AM

Ants are clever fellows, they even look after the elderly and the sick of their community. Nice write Lukas.

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