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Summer Haiku

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Summer Lovin' Short Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich daybreak ascends morn’ glowbugs gleam with fervor scents of solstice Form: Modern Haiku Checked Syllables at: www.howmanysyllables.com Date Written: May 16, 2016

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Date: 5/21/2016 3:23:00 PM
Excellent Haiku, Luloo. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2016 9:29:00 AM
Pleased to see this on the winners' list, Laura! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:23:00 PM
What I liked most in yours, Laura, was the last line. The alliteration of it and the descriptiveness of scents of solstice just beautiful!! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/21/2016 10:27:00 AM
thank you very much Andrea!!! :)-luloo
Date: 5/18/2016 1:37:00 PM
What a delightful poem, Laura! The projected image and scent of solstice won me over:) Regards // paul
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Date: 5/18/2016 6:20:00 PM
aww thanks Paul! :)-luloo
Date: 5/17/2016 11:54:00 AM
unique take on the theme LuLoo very beautiful good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/17/2016 4:59:00 PM
many thanks lady Jan :)-luloo
Date: 5/16/2016 9:42:00 PM
lovely haiku Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/17/2016 2:49:00 PM
thank you Lenny:)-luloo

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