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Summer Haiku

Summer Haiku



Gliding through blue waves

freedom that exhilarates

surfing my ocean...




05/15/16

freedomoceansummerhaiku

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John Michaels

April 16, 2017 at 4:05 AM

Some great imagery, here - very nice job, Brian. Regards, John.

Bl Devnath

May 22, 2016 at 9:29 AM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Brian Davey

May 23, 2016 at 2:44 AM

Thank you so much

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2016 at 5:31 PM

Brian, just saw your reply to me here. I think you are doing great so far in your practice of short forms. Oh, and remember not to capitalize even the first word!! Let me see if you have done any other short ones.

Brian Davey

May 23, 2016 at 2:44 AM

Thank you for the advice! You really are not even suppose to capitalize the first word?