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Summer Haiku

Summer Haiku
Gliding through blue waves freedom that exhilarates surfing my ocean...
05/15/16

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John Michaels
Date: 4/16/2017 4:05:00 AM
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Some great imagery, here - very nice job, Brian. Regards, John.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/22/2016 9:29:00 AM
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Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/23/2016 2:44:00 AM
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Thank you so much
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2016 5:31:00 PM
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Brian, just saw your reply to me here. I think you are doing great so far in your practice of short forms. Oh, and remember not to capitalize even the first word!! Let me see if you have done any other short ones.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/23/2016 2:44:00 AM
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Thank you for the advice! You really are not even suppose to capitalize the first word?
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/21/2016 3:30:00 PM
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Excellent Haiku, bRIAN. Congratulations on your nice placement. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/23/2016 2:43:00 AM
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Thank you Sandra
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/21/2016 12:14:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Brian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/23/2016 2:43:00 AM
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Thank you Sunshine
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/20/2016 7:33:00 PM
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Was looking for a twist in the last line. other than that, you did a great job!! Congrats in my contest.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/21/2016 4:53:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea I am still a little shaky on my short, short poems but practice makes perfect!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2016 12:23:00 PM
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- Sounds like a lovely summer, Brian :) - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/15/2016 3:53:00 PM
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Thank you Sunshine
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 5/15/2016 12:08:00 PM
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nice three liner Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/15/2016 3:53:00 PM
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Thank you Lenny

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