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Summer Haiku

across the seascape
visions infuse with sunlight -
footprints wane in tide 

summer waves roil sand
eroding lines and dunes –
salt water stings wound 

Summer’s orbit ends
fog chills exhaled breath - 
a lone ship calls   

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 2/1/2015 10:15:00 AM
Wonderful haiku read from you. You have depicted a nice picture with beautiful words. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 1/24/2015 2:52:00 PM
Lordy me Rhonda...SO glad to see your elegant, irresistible poetry again and you write it with insight, wisdom and CLASS...I am addicted to the ocean and if there is such a thing as reincarnation, I was most certainly a Dolphin or an Octopus (I picked those because they are intelligent) 'Summer's orbit ends'...WOW - Tim
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Date: 1/23/2015 1:18:00 PM
Delightful images aplenty in this Haiku Set, nice - James :)
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Date: 1/23/2015 6:07:00 AM
Ahh!! A beautiful journey ended by the call of the ship..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:56:00 PM
MY oh my, Rhonda. You were very inspired with this set. I love summer and here you have infused it with sadness as well.
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Date: 1/22/2015 11:12:00 PM
Rhonda, a beautiful seascape you paint with words!
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Date: 1/22/2015 5:52:00 PM
Ah, yes the sea . . . the wind, waves, and the call . . . love your haiku . . . much love and light dear Rhonda!! 7
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Date: 1/22/2015 5:02:00 PM
I echo Eileen's comment...
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Date: 1/22/2015 3:09:00 PM
Haiku is not an easy form...I shy away from them. These are a beautiful string of haiku. Lovely images of summer. Great write
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Date: 1/22/2015 12:57:00 PM
Beautiful Summer Haiku. Loved it.
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Date: 1/22/2015 12:49:00 PM
- Beautiful haiku, Rhonda ..... winter here, but look forward to lovely spring .... (and summer :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/22/2015 12:54:00 PM
I hope spring comes soon for you...It's always summer where I am in Florida. :))