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Summer Grass

Summer Grass Willowy green blades; SUMMER'S textured green carpet... Waving lazily.

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Nick Bagnall

Date: 6/18/2010 5:45:00 AM

Oh - that's nice ! the willowy waving is just right for long grass Well done

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/22/2010 5:39:00 PM

nice! perhaps ..jade carpet? instead of green twice? And I'm with andrea great last line!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2010 9:10:00 AM

Love that last line, it is so summery! congratulations. Andrea

Date: 5/18/2010 8:14:00 PM

Liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Charles's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Jeralynn. Love, Carol

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/18/2010 9:08:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice...Jimmy

Amy Green

Date: 5/18/2010 8:19:00 AM

Feeling this one, the lazy days of summer. Enjoyed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2010 7:58:00 AM

Congrats Jeralynn on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest with this awesome poem... enjoy another great win..luv.. Linda-Marie

Charles Henderson

Date: 5/17/2010 11:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome 10th place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/15/2010 3:36:00 PM

Very nice Haiku, Jeralyn...good luck in the contest.....Later, Jimmy

Rick Parise

Date: 5/15/2010 9:34:00 AM

Very nice~enjoy the last line~~Rick

Date: 5/14/2010 4:02:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative perspective. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2010 3:12:00 PM

This is a beautifully written haiku, Jeralynn. I love the thought of the green grass "waving lazily" in the summer breeze. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn