Summer Fun

Soap bubbles float through mid-school breeze that crack our giggles, to the playful night, we dab the sheen film on oak trees or glue bobbed orbs on crushes’ kites And vapor-like, our summers warmly wrap the peek-a-boos squeaking tag games on moonlit field where foams eavesdrop; inviting tricks without a shame Long days collect more popping sprees as sticky piles knot in our hair like wiggles on tanned sun, how free to mess around till burnt cheeks tear The madness of young summer brings under red stars, I feel her bubbles sing. Contest: SKat-Oz's Summer Poems
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Gildersleeve Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 5:49 AM
Nette you never disappoint. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 9:56 PM
hello, NETTE the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 12:54 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot nette xx
Ryerson Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 3:18 PM
'The madness of young summer' sums this beauty up perfectly Nette...Most of the ones I have read so far are about childhood memories when we lived fancy-free and totally in the present...such a difficult thing to do as adults...I am working on another footle series poking fun at fellow Soupers and you will be included... WARNING: I shall show no mercy...
A  Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 1:32 PM
Nette, a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT ....
Brown Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Summer Fun" contest Nette. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 11:20 PM
Nette, a wonderful congratulations with your awesome win in craig cornish's " Summer Fun " Xool contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
Gasun Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 12:35 AM
Congratulations on your GRAND WIN nette!!! You're indeed a great poet!! :)
Ramage Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 9:05 PM
Just lovely, I see the bubbles sing too. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
Song Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Summer took on a whole new and very interesting personality with your poetry paintbrush, Nette...you squeezed the fun out of each and every long summer's day...very much enjoyed your golden win! gwendolen
Liwayway Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your big win Nette. Cheers!!
Alvez Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations nette, so wonderful! My senses are teased. Cynthia
Guzzi Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 7:06 AM
A rambling romp threw a whirlwind summer. Congrad's on your win. Thanks for the emories! Light & Love
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 2:33 AM
Nette, Nette....this one belongs at the top. I just loved it. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Sefunmi Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 2:04 AM
I enjoyed reading this. Congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 8:25 PM
lovely portrait of those sunny funny days.Wow, congrats on your top spot, Nette. Well done.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 8:14 PM
You are a one-of-a-kind gifted poet, Nette! Your words flow like honey. Congrats on a super first place win! Hugs, Rhonda
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 7:44 PM
Congratulations nette, what a lovely summer xx
Johnson Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations Nette on your big win with your carefree summer fun poem. Love, Joyce
Datubo Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Nice Piece Nette...
Squyres Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 10:03 AM
This sounds so delightful....I can hear the giggles !!
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Reads like a winning entry..Very poetic entry..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..I had to look up text symbols to write that work for I don't text..Sara
Alvez Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 5:03 PM
I hear it, feel it, see it! Lovely! Cynthia
Babcock Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 4:50 PM
Summer is over and the fall leaves are turning gold and falling. Wish it was summer again and love your poem on summer fun. love phyl
Sivey Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 3:22 PM
This is a perfect poem for the summer! This describes the fun we all have experienced at one point or another in the summer! I just loved this wonderful Hot summer delight you have penned here my friend! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
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