Summer Fun

Being a Princess, I am dressed in starched
Dotted swiss in lilac with white raised polka dots.
Satin ribbons in my Shirley Temple curls, I begged to wear
Which all little girls wore no matter the color or length of their hair.
Shiny shoes of black patent leather I cried to wear... and
Of course the weather was divine and happiness was mine.

Ice cream cones and a merry-go-round
I rode over and over again, giving no sound
Of the panic I felt as it turned and turned,
Too fast for my delight, but I showed no fright.
We rolled and rolled down green velvet hills
In frolicing thrills...my dress suddenly a mess.
Mama's warning to keep the dress clean was
Lost in a dream as we screamed, my sibblings
And I...playing tag and swinging on swings
Pushed high in the air and I forgot about my hair
With its Shirley Temple Curls, now a swirl that
No longer curled.

Summer fun, ah so nice to retrace my memories blessed
back to that place of laughter, dreams  and happiness. 

Written "Just Off TThe Top of My Head"
Sunday August 26, 2012 12:15 p.m.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Summer Fun" contest Cynthia. Love, Carol
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September 15, 2012 at 11:20 PM
Cynthia, a wonderful congratulations with your awesome win in craig cornish's " Summer Fun " Xool contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
Gasun Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 12:32 AM
My hearty congratulations on your GRAND WIN my dear friend, Cynthia. This is really fantastic!!!! I've enjoyed reading it. Thank you for taking your time to read and enjoy my work. Best wishes and luck to you always, hugs:) leonora
Ramage Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Nice poem, lovely story, congratulations on your first place win. Lee
Song Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Flowing as nicely as your childhood polka-dotted dress...fun to imagine u swinging and enjoying your Shirley Temple curls...grandiose rhyme and win! Enjoyed thoroughly! gwendolen
Onclaud Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 11:00 AM
this is a summer worth remembering, C.. beautifully crafted with huge cheers to you for a top win.. so glad to share this spot with you.. :) huggs!
Horsman Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:12 AM
congrats on this wonderful winner.
Liwayway Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 9:20 AM
Big Congratulations on your win friend Cynthia!! its an awesome poem! :) cheers!!!!!!!!
Guzzi Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 6:41 AM
Congrad's on your win! Wonderful memories! Light & Love
Alvez Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 8:37 AM
Debbie Thank you for letting me know...Wow, so exciting! Cynthia
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 2:35 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful First place win with this lovely poem Cynthia!
Alvez Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 8:39 AM
Connie, Thank you...I am so excitited to have won! Cynthia
Pettit Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations on winning with this nice extemporaneous entry.
Alvez Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Robert, Ah! Your comments, a treasure! Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 8:30 PM
wonderful to see this, and I see it was just off the top of your head. WOW. Congrats on this enjoyable read.
Alvez Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Andrea, The WOW factor indeed! Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Cynthia
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 8:30 PM
and the shirley temple reference was so cute!
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September 12, 2012 at 8:03 PM
I can see the before and after pictures, Cynthia! The images of the little girl spinning in curls is adorable. My grandma would curl my hair into ringlets in the summer. By midday they were limp and nearly gone, but I loved the attention...a great write that brought back memories. Congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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September 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations Cythia, what a lovely summer xx
Johnson Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 7:19 PM
Little tomboy princess. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Liwayway Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 10:59 AM
enjoy reading your awesome poem Cynthia...thanks for sharing..have a nice day!
Alvez Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 11:08 AM
Thank you so much for your comment on this, another of my favorite writes. Cynthia
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