Summer Evening

SUMMER EVENING
The summer sun
takes rest behind the hill
after getting tired,
And the boiled ocean 
breathes happily
after loosing his weight.

The mad storm
stops blowing & becomes silent
after loosing its temper,
And a company of confused parrots
returns to their nest
accelerating speed with top gear.

An undressed tree
awaiting near the bank of a river
for the  returns of his friend
who has gone for fishing,
The soul purifying echos 
coming from the nearest hill
ensure his joyous back
with a happy ending.

The naughty tides are enjoying
just by dancing, singing
and playing hide and seek
with the light of moon & force of air,
The sound of sacrosanct evening bell
coming out the nearest temple
convey the message of summer evening
To enjoy a lot with near and dear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/26/2017 5:42:00 AM
Hello Manmath. Marvelous. The theme is tops with me. You grace us with different circumstances within Summer. Nature is amazing and so is a Summer Evening. I loved the thought of the tides with her force and sound. Wonderful imagery. Well done in its entirety.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/6/2017 2:00:00 AM
Reminds me of the song SUMMER OF '69 popularized by BRYAN ADAMS+++ nice... congrats+++
Login to Reply
Date: 4/30/2016 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. A 7 i feel for this beautiful picture. Loved always, bl
Login to Reply
Date: 4/18/2016 11:30:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments about my poem this evening. I see you are very new here. Welcome to you and your good writing. I am so amazed at the people who write such great poetry using a second language. I presume that since you are from India that English is not your native language. Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2016 9:44:00 PM
The imagery in this poem is astonishing. Virtually every line creates a vivid, compelling picture. Add to that the flow and the message, and the result is an exquisite composition. Wonderful work, Manmath.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2016 6:22:00 PM
this is wonderful personification . I really like it. Loosing should be losing.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/13/2016 10:30:00 AM
A very lovely poem...beauty of nature personified! Lovely imagery. // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2016 11:36:00 AM
This is beautiful, I bet you can paint as well... if you don't start.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2016 1:01:00 AM
This poem is so beautiful Manmath but would get more views if it were listed under 'personification' instead of 'rhyme'. I love reading these kind of poems that give personality to nature and the elements. I am going to put this poem into my favorite file here at Poetry Soup. Aloha, Connie It is a definite #7. ; )
Login to Reply
Date: 4/1/2016 12:38:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Manmath - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Dalei Avatar
Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thanks. Hugs..........MKD
Date: 4/1/2016 7:35:00 AM
Good morning, Manmath, beautiful write.. The imagery and glory of a new summer evening is well designed.. happy endings.. hugs...Linda
Login to Reply
Dalei Avatar
Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Linda......hugs...MKD
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter