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The summer sun
takes rest behind the hill
after getting tired,
And the boiled ocean 
breathes happily
after loosing his weight.

The mad storm
stops blowing & becomes silent
after loosing its temper,
And a company of confused parrots
returns to their nest
accelerating speed with top gear.

An undressed tree
awaiting near the bank of a river
for the  returns of his friend
who has gone for fishing,
The soul purifying echos 
coming from the nearest hill
ensure his joyous back
with a happy ending.

The naughty tides are enjoying
just by dancing, singing
and playing hide and seek
with the light of moon & force of air,
The sound of sacrosanct evening bell
coming out the nearest temple
convey the message of summer evening
To enjoy a lot with near and dear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 3/26/2017 5:42:00 AM
Hello Manmath. Marvelous. The theme is tops with me. You grace us with different circumstances within Summer. Nature is amazing and so is a Summer Evening. I loved the thought of the tides with her force and sound. Wonderful imagery. Well done in its entirety.
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Date: 1/6/2017 2:00:00 AM
Reminds me of the song SUMMER OF '69 popularized by BRYAN ADAMS+++ nice... congrats+++
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. A 7 i feel for this beautiful picture. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/18/2016 11:30:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments about my poem this evening. I see you are very new here. Welcome to you and your good writing. I am so amazed at the people who write such great poetry using a second language. I presume that since you are from India that English is not your native language. Joyce
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Date: 4/15/2016 9:44:00 PM
The imagery in this poem is astonishing. Virtually every line creates a vivid, compelling picture. Add to that the flow and the message, and the result is an exquisite composition. Wonderful work, Manmath.
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Date: 4/15/2016 6:22:00 PM
this is wonderful personification . I really like it. Loosing should be losing.
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Date: 4/13/2016 10:30:00 AM
A very lovely of nature personified! Lovely imagery. // paul
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Date: 4/5/2016 11:36:00 AM
This is beautiful, I bet you can paint as well... if you don't start.
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Date: 4/4/2016 1:01:00 AM
This poem is so beautiful Manmath but would get more views if it were listed under 'personification' instead of 'rhyme'. I love reading these kind of poems that give personality to nature and the elements. I am going to put this poem into my favorite file here at Poetry Soup. Aloha, Connie It is a definite #7. ; )
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Date: 4/1/2016 12:38:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Manmath - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thanks. Hugs..........MKD
Date: 4/1/2016 7:35:00 AM
Good morning, Manmath, beautiful write.. The imagery and glory of a new summer evening is well designed.. happy endings.. hugs...Linda
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/1/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Linda......hugs...MKD