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Summer Ended

Summer has ended
  The leaves are starting to change
   To brown, red, yellow
    Then the gust of wind will blow
    All the leaves downward

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Alfred Berggren

October 27, 2017 at 12:45 PM

Gotta get that rake and put them in heaps to burn. The smell is so nice.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 27, 2017 at 2:04 PM

I like the colours of the leaves,but I do not like to rake them. The leaves here do not shed until November. Have a nice day my friend.

Mike Reed

October 17, 2017 at 9:06 AM

Darlene, Nice Poem, It won't be long now till we're raking leaves! Thanks for your comments on my poem, "Chicago Play". Thank you, Mike Reed

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 17, 2017 at 12:38 PM

I like the poem Chicago Play.I enjoyed writing this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

October 2, 2017 at 7:11 PM

one of my favorite seasons. I enjoyed your Tanka.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 3, 2017 at 7:22 AM

Hello Richard.How are you today? Summer is my favourite season as well. Have a nice day my friend.

Roy Pett

October 2, 2017 at 4:48 AM

Lovely Tanka Darlene, summer is my favourite season but autumn has charm. :))

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 2, 2017 at 12:29 PM

Hello Roy, thank you for your comment. Yes Autumn has charm. I like the colour leaves. Raking them up, I do not. Have anice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 1, 2017 at 8:03 AM

- A beautiful and colorful time, lovely poem Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 1, 2017 at 2:22 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile,I like the colour leaves. is it Fall in Norway? Have a nice day my friend.

Maurice Rigoler

September 28, 2017 at 11:53 AM

This hasn't happen yet where I live in New England but in the next weeks everything should be ablaze in colors! My take on Autumn is often not so much about the transformations it undergoes, rather that it is essential a season of death and decay. I am too much a realist to gloss this over. Merci pour tes commentaires. / M

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 28, 2017 at 12:50 PM

I refer autumn as mother nature's spilled paint box. She seems to put the colours in the right places. I just do not like to rake the leaves. Anyway, that is how i see autumn. have a nice day my friend.