Summer End

Tired parents and their children pack their things
cramming buckets,balls and spades into the car
heading back home with souvenirs they bring
some postcards and a starfish in a jar.

On cue the tide comes in, with gulls in tow
erasing traces of the summer fun
with every wave sandcastles slowly go,
shadows diminish with the setting sun .

In silence, thoughts turn to the months ahead,
new school or back again to daily grind
the rush to dress the kids and get them fed,
all thoughts of that long summer left behind.

Ship's bell swings in the wind beside the pier
across deserted beach, sounds the all clear.

29th August 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Love the poem, Viv, I miss those days when I was younger when my parents gave us a wonderful treat to the ocean. Then my husband and I carried the treat for my boys congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Babbit Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:58 AM
And life returns to its proper place. How beautiful you've written the summer end.
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Thank you, DM, a wistful time as we enter the Autumn. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:58 AM
A beautiful write Mr Viv. With the school holidays drawing to a close I am sure there are many who can relate to this poem:-) hugs Jan xx7
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Thanks, Jan, think of me on your next stroll along the point of Ayre, Viv x
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:28 AM
This poem has the lovely nostalgia of the end of summer and in your last couplet there is kind of haunting sadness in the bells ringing. This is very moving Viv. ; ) 7
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 5:41 AM
Thanks, Connie, I appreciate it, since where you live, you're an expert on things coastal. Viv x
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