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Tired parents and their children pack their things cramming buckets,balls and spades into the car heading back home with souvenirs they bring some postcards and a starfish in a jar. On cue the tide comes in, with gulls in tow erasing traces of the summer fun with every wave sandcastles slowly go, shadows diminish with the setting sun . In silence, thoughts turn to the months ahead, new school or back again to daily grind the rush to dress the kids and get them fed, all thoughts of that long summer left behind. Ship's bell swings in the wind beside the pier across deserted beach, sounds the all clear. 29th August 2016

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Date: 8/31/2016 2:53:00 PM
Love the poem, Viv, I miss those days when I was younger when my parents gave us a wonderful treat to the ocean. Then my husband and I carried the treat for my boys congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:58:00 AM
And life returns to its proper place. How beautiful you've written the summer end.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/29/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, DM, a wistful time as we enter the Autumn. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 8/29/2016 9:58:00 AM
A beautiful write Mr Viv. With the school holidays drawing to a close I am sure there are many who can relate to this poem:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/29/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, think of me on your next stroll along the point of Ayre, Viv x
Date: 8/29/2016 2:28:00 AM
This poem has the lovely nostalgia of the end of summer and in your last couplet there is kind of haunting sadness in the bells ringing. This is very moving Viv. ; ) 7
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Viv Wigley
Date: 8/29/2016 5:41:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, I appreciate it, since where you live, you're an expert on things coastal. Viv x

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