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Summer Dreams

Upon my pillow leave a gentle kiss of hope along with shallow breaths of love and truth while the flotsam arias of your fragrant soap linger softly on the tendrils of my youth. Attire me in summer dress and sandelettes and as a gentle sun soft-sets my shoulderettes lead me to that place where all my dreams insist on cradling a sun that never ceases to exist.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/21/2024 6:37:00 PM

Dear Rose, a beautiful and delicate dance between longing and nostalgia, each line a brushstroke of summer's warmth and dreams. I loved how your scenes of gentle kisses and fragrant soap conjures a sense of intimacy, while the longing for eternal sunshine speaks to the timeless yearning for lasting happiness. In me it is evoking memories of summers past and the hope for endless days ahead. What abeautiful glimpse into the soul's desire for everlasting bliss. - Blessings, Daniel

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/21/2024 5:13:00 AM

Beautiful opening and ending lines serve as ornate bookends to your poem, my friend.--Upon my pillow leave a gentle kiss of hope along with shallow breaths of love and truth --- lead me to that place where all my dreams insist on cradling a sun--- awesome!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/21/2024 5:26:00 PM

Thank you for always leaving such a generous comment, you make me smile !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/20/2024 7:38:00 PM

This is so romantic.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/21/2024 5:10:00 AM

Thank you Richard, wishing you a beautiful day full of inspiration, and great poetry !

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/20/2024 4:32:00 PM

such an eloquent and beautifully written poem dear Rose! Your poem flows with its delicate but descriptive imagery that captured my heart from the get go. I felt such positive energy and faith in your poem. I especially liked "Attire me in summer dress and sandelettes and as a gentle sun soft-sets my shoulderettes..." I love your poetic voice and style Another fave for me. hugs and blessings, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/20/2024 6:24:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it Sara, grateful for your presence here.

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/20/2024 4:27:00 PM

a gentle kiss, a lingering scent, a ray of hope and a sun that never sets, who could ask for anything more, dear poet

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/20/2024 6:24:00 PM

Thank you Frederic for your kind visit and your lovely comment .