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Summer Dreams

Upon my pillow leave a gentle kiss of hope along with shallow breaths of love and truth while the flotsam arias of your fragrant soap linger softly on the tendrils of my youth. Attire me in summer dress and sandelettes and as a gentle sun soft-sets my shoulderettes lead me to that place where all my dreams insist on cradling a sun that never ceases to exist.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/21/2024 6:37:00 PM

Dear Rose, a beautiful and delicate dance between longing and nostalgia, each line a brushstroke of summer's warmth and dreams. I loved how your scenes of gentle kisses and fragrant soap conjures a sense of intimacy, while the longing for eternal sunshine speaks to the timeless yearning for lasting happiness. In me it is evoking memories of summers past and the hope for endless days ahead. What abeautiful glimpse into the soul's desire for everlasting bliss. - Blessings, Daniel

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/21/2024 5:13:00 AM

Beautiful opening and ending lines serve as ornate bookends to your poem, my friend.--Upon my pillow leave a gentle kiss of hope along with shallow breaths of love and truth --- lead me to that place where all my dreams insist on cradling a sun--- awesome!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/21/2024 5:26:00 PM