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Summer Desire

All this hot weather is getting to me And the humidity doesn’t help, I’m looking for a nice cool pool To have a refreshing swim, After which, I’ll relax ‘Neath a shady tree And as the night Approaches, I’ll croak, “Cool!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2010 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Paul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 12:09:00 AM
haha, very cool, indeed Paul! Congrats on your win with this :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:53:00 PM
I love the coolness of this summer poem. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:58:00 AM
Good use of humor. You have me smiling. Congratulations on placing second in Andrea's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:28:00 AM
HAHA!- Good one, congrats!
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:18:00 AM
Your summer certainly sounds better than mine has been so far. Congratulations on your win in this fun contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:38:00 AM
This was SO cute, I just had to pick it for one of my top winners in my contest. Congratulations, paul, on your third place win! andrea
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