Paul Holmes Poet Etheree

Summer Desire

All this hot weather is getting to me
And the humidity doesn’t help,
I’m looking for a nice cool pool
To have a refreshing swim,
After which, I’ll relax
 ‘Neath a shady tree
And as the night
Approaches,
I’ll croak,
“Cool!”

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 21, 2010 at 6:48 AM Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Paul. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 21, 2010 at 12:09 AM haha, very cool, indeed Paul! Congrats on your win with this :)-- nikko :)

Iolanda Scripca June 20, 2010 at 8:10 PM Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda

Joseph Spence Sr June 20, 2010 at 6:53 PM I love the coolness of this summer poem. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph

June 20, 2010 at 11:58 AM Good use of humor. You have me smiling. Congratulations on placing second in Andrea's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

Amy Green June 20, 2010 at 9:28 AM HAHA!- Good one, congrats!

Joyce Johnson June 20, 2010 at 7:18 AM Your summer certainly sounds better than mine has been so far. Congratulations on your win in this fun contest. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2010 at 3:38 AM This was SO cute, I just had to pick it for one of my top winners in my contest. Congratulations, paul, on your third place win! andrea