summer delight

oh the helpless field
breathing those sad summer seeds~
I beg the sun…..sleep
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Gibbons Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 3:42 AM
Awesome haiku Lioness I giggled at end I beg the sun... sleep I sure feel like shouting that today as UK in heatwave. The suns rays are melting me ha ha happy writing <3
G  Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 8:34 AM
Omg the visions this plus the hashtags are causing! Welcome to the haiku journey - Ink probably didn't mention but she's decided we are writing a haiku a fortnight for an undisclosed period of time haha
Onpaper Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 8:37 AM
I shall where ever thou shall me ask me to be
Empress Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 8:29 AM
Im literally on the floor, rolling rolling rolling rolling. Hahhahahhaha omg thank you! We all need laughs to get thru! Hahahah and oh my those hashtags! Lolol poor fields! The sun MUST SLEEEP!!!!! so glad u joined the train!! I can hear u read this in a very thick accent hahaha
Onpaper Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 8:33 AM
Hahahahahaha it’s thick accent or nothing at alll papi!!! XD
Liguori Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Greatest poem/haiku ever written! Pleasure to read/experience your artistic craft.
Onpaper Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 8:34 AM
Thank you sooo much for enjoying my lil haiku
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