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A shinning days warmth consents to its languid pace tranquil life entwined, naturally finding shade in its own cast of shadows Traditional Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charlotte Jade Puddifoot 05/26/2016

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Date: 5/27/2016 5:01:00 PM
I love the "tranquil" picture you paint with your words, Charlie! Outstanding tanka :)
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Date: 5/27/2016 10:19:00 PM
Thank you Laura...
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Date: 5/27/2016 10:15:00 PM
Date: 5/27/2016 11:23:00 AM
The picture tied with the poem compliment each other extremely well. I just love your final two lines with it's depth of thought. Best of luck, Charlie.
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Date: 5/27/2016 10:15:00 PM
Thank you Tim...
Date: 5/27/2016 8:07:00 AM
You are a true communicator! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/27/2016 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Richard...
Date: 5/26/2016 3:54:00 PM
Very nice :)
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Date: 5/26/2016 8:29:00 PM
Thank you Casarah...
Date: 5/26/2016 2:07:00 PM
Charlie Sir, this write and that pic....I want to pack my bags and go there RIGHT NOW! Don't want to wait for summer!!! Visually powerful!
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Date: 5/26/2016 8:29:00 PM
I'm with you Walter. Thank you for the visit...
Date: 5/26/2016 2:07:00 PM
A lovely poem in which you exploit well the lazy, peaceful feelings of summer days. I especially like the last two lines. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thank you Paul...

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