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Summer Couplet

Through sand and haze beach goers stroll
Leaving footprints where soft crested waves roll
~*~


6/10/'13

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Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2013 at 10:52 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Tim Ryerson

July 2, 2013 at 2:38 AM

Haven't read much of your poems lately Annalise...I see you have not lost your lovely touch...Perfect picture painted here...I am absolutely addicted to the ocean...I must have been a dolphin or a fish in another life - Tim

Connie Gildersleeve

July 1, 2013 at 6:23 PM

Annalise I love this summer image at the beach. Congratulations on your fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ilene Bauer

July 1, 2013 at 4:49 PM

nice one! congrats on your win!

Sara Kendrick

July 1, 2013 at 3:27 PM

Great flow and rhyme in this winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara

Kim Merryman

June 30, 2013 at 4:17 PM

A perfect picture of summer! Congrats on your 1st place win, Annalise!

Debbie Guzzi

June 30, 2013 at 2:42 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

June 30, 2013 at 1:06 PM

you capture summer's beautiful moment in every word amd line, annalise... sweet congrats!..:)

John Posey

June 29, 2013 at 6:47 PM

I couldn't agree more with whomever placed this on top... well deserved.... Congratulations.... Jake

Skat A

June 29, 2013 at 3:02 PM

Annalise, a lovey tranquil feel. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Kash Poet

June 29, 2013 at 1:11 PM

Congrats Annalise on your win in the contest.Lovely couplet!

Carrie Richards

June 29, 2013 at 10:08 AM

This rolls off the tongue, so perfectly and lovely!! Congratulations on this beautiful poem, Annalise!!

Andrea Dietrich

June 29, 2013 at 8:38 AM

I love this one. A stroll on the beach is , for me, the perfect summer image!! congrats on your number one win in my contest.

Joyce Johnson

June 29, 2013 at 8:22 AM

Summer contentment in a capsule. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Richard Lamoureux

June 29, 2013 at 7:23 AM

Aahhhhh congratulations.

Drjim Martin

June 29, 2013 at 7:01 AM

Very nice!! Congrats on your win....Jim

Seren Roberts

June 29, 2013 at 3:10 AM

Nice gentle couplet liked it .....Seren

Jack Horne

June 15, 2013 at 11:21 AM

I can picture this sweet scene

Connie Gildersleeve

June 14, 2013 at 6:58 PM

This is a fine couplet. I miss the sand, the waves and the smell of sea air. An awesome image you've conveyed. Thank you for an inviting beach scene. Warm Smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman

June 14, 2013 at 8:48 AM

this is amazing Annalise, the visual so good.,..

Jack Ellison

June 14, 2013 at 7:47 AM

Love your poetry dear Annalise! Words are few but are oh so expressive! Hugs...

Timothy Hicks

June 13, 2013 at 12:26 AM

Love the subtlety of your couplet. Reminds me of my trips to the Oregon coast, literally spending hours walking along the coast line... oh the beauty of living in the moment.... those footprints don't last long!