Summer by the Pool

Laying out by the pool, Jules was caught
wearing less than the rules said she aught

She was asked by the cop
why she'd cast off her top

Her reply? "it's s July and I'm hot"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Healey Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Makes perfect sense to me! But the rules say otherwise! Congrats. Well done. Cheers from Canada.
Harding Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 9:44 PM
Thank you, Jim! I wasn't sure you guys were still talking to us Americans. I'm glad we're still friends! Xoxo LyLy
Miller Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 2:36 AM
Ha ha, very funny and nice cadence, congratulations
Harding Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 9:45 PM
Thank you, Terry xoxo LyLy
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 12:23 AM
Congrats. I really like this one
Harding Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 9:47 PM
Hi Dre - As you know, I'm the queen of all limericks.Thank you! Xoxo LyLy
Kitchin Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Lycia, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick.
Harding Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 2:57 PM
Thank you, Tania! xoxo Lyly
Woods Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 12:06 PM
Very cute! The meter and rhymes are fantastic in this one! Xo
Harding Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 2:58 PM
Thank you Crystol! xoxo Lyly
Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 3:06 AM
A brave soul to do such a thing in our terrible world. A poor excuse is better than none. Sara K
Harding Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 9:48 PM
Silly Sara! Xoxo LyLy
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