Summer Butterfly

Summer butterfly
vibrant wings brighten long days
heat from your passion
cocooned 'til our love flies free
as we dream of sweet nectar


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
for Let's Pass a Tanka Love Note contest (Rick Parise) 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:04 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
Harrington Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Amazing! Congrats on your win...Tanya
Williams Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 2:18 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
Green Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 11:49 PM
WOW... SO much meaning in so few words. This is an incredible write. WOW- going to faves.
Grisetti Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Congratulations on your lovely tanka win.
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May 24, 2012 at 5:07 PM
Hi, Rhonda, i have a question for you... I'm sending soup mail... pd..
Brown Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 8:27 AM
I am stopping by your poetry to thank you for your kind comments on my writing. It has been a pleasure to read yours today Rhonda. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 10:22 PM
wonderful and a love poem just like he wanted, Rhonda.
Neels Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:02 AM
"cocooned 'til our love flies free" I just love that line Rhonda :) All the best for Rick's contest! Thanks for the smiles with your comment.. Just an hour and half to go then it's home time for me!! love & blessings Wilma
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May 21, 2012 at 3:27 AM
Rhonda, this is sooo beautiful.....BEAUTIFUL !!!! Gold place in contest I hope for you!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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