Summer Butterfly

is there a reason your tiny wings flutter by in eager pursuit tasting here and tasting there like a sprite in summer's dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Henderson Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 12:20 AM
So nice. I like the beautiful simplicity.
Cooper Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 10:07 AM
love the last line! :)
Peranteau Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 8:08 AM
One of the reasons why I grow the Verbena dear poet...for them there "Butter flies" ! *smiles* Great write Barbara ! Have a beauuuutiful weekend....much love, james
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May 22, 2012 at 5:49 PM
This is a well put tanka, Barbara:) There is a lightness to this piece.
Horne Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 1:21 PM
I love this beautiful tanka, Barbara. Congrats on all your wins : )
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 9:15 PM
I really like this. I sure want to try one now!!
Croft Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 4:58 PM
very nice. thank you for your kind comment on my poetry.
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 12:56 PM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Barbara. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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May 21, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Wonderful one..Enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Your presence at work was uplifting..Soup mail soon..Sara
Belt Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:42 AM
A Beautiful painting Barb.....Larry
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