Summer Breeze

on the summer breeze 
kites are flying everywhere 
some get stuck in trees

28/06/21
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La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:31 PM
Catherine, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ love and serenity _ Constance
Smillie Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 12:12 AM
Thank you very much
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 8:09 PM
back with congrats again. Great image.
Smillie Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 12:56 AM
Thank you very much
Hargreaves Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 11:48 AM
This brings back memories. Used to enjoy kite flying. Didn't get it tangled in trees but once in telephone wires. Best wishes.
Allison Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 1:08 AM
love the final line so true!:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:06 PM
- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Smillie Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Thank you very much
Kitchin Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Catherine, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!
Smillie Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Thank you very much
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:22 AM
cute ku!! Congrats.
Smillie Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Thank you very much
Faulkner Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Flying kites is such a summer time feeling, like the imagery of them stuck in the trees too!
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