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Summer Breeze

See the pictures lined up on the table
     At the family home inside the door
See the meal laid out across the table
     After church for dinner and more

Summer breeze brings you to mind
     Stirs memories I have left behind
Summer breeze brings you to mind
     Stirs memories I have left behind

Hear the soft voices as food is served
     Sounds forgotten are good to hear
Seems like it all was only yesterday 
     Your lilting laugh music to my ears

Summer breeze brings you to mind
     Stirs memories I have left behind
Summer breeze brings you to mind
     Stirs memories I have left behind

Long summer moments lasted for days
     Looking at you is like it was back then
Warm gentle kisses in slow dance sways
     My heart wildly begins to spin

I hear laughter echoing through our home
      When I return after being on the road
Our children run to greet me at the door
      Each one I have longed to hold

Summer breeze brings you to mind
     Stirs memories I have left behind
Summer breeze brings you to mind
     Stirs memories I have left behind


August 10, 2018

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Date: 8/11/2018 9:54:00 PM
Susan, you write with skill and style.. you are really good with lyrics. Perhaps we can pen a song together?!?!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/11/2018 11:54:00 PM
Why thank you! I'm new at lyrics but I would be happy to see what we can do.
Date: 8/11/2018 10:14:00 AM
Memories remembered when something stirs your mind.. Nicely done Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/11/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Eve! I put this off and then really got into it once I tried. :)
Date: 8/11/2018 3:32:00 AM
The rhythm and story line perfectly complement the original melody, Susan. I was singing along as I read!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/11/2018 4:01:00 PM
Oh why thanks, Wendy! So glad you liked it and it worked. :)
Date: 8/11/2018 3:03:00 AM
such gorgeous lyrics Susan I love the impact of the repeated chorus:-) hugs jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/11/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I went with the 2nd one. Appreciate you.
Date: 8/11/2018 1:45:00 AM
Lovely lyric Susan. Tom
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/11/2018 2:14:00 AM
I don't think I did it right. Thank you though.
Date: 8/11/2018 12:07:00 AM
good love song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ZrPPN7EkL8
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/11/2018 4:00:00 PM
Great song... Summer Wind. And Sinatra. I've just recently started appreciating him and his style. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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