Charlie Smith Poet Lyric

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Summer Breeze

Soft lights with warm winds pirouetting in time
whispering its music so perfectly in rhyme

Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress
Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess

Moonlight in concert reflecting its bliss
Starlight's twinkle, a pretentious first kiss

Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress
Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess

The concert of summer called gently your name
Softly, by this music into my life you came

Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress
Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess.

08/10/2018

Summer Breeze Contest

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Sanket Jain October 7, 2019 at 8:21 PM Hello Charlie. That's a good read. From very first line alliteration started. ?? searching for love and concert of summer are lovely. The refrain worked here and it suits nicely. Keep in touch.

Gary Bateman September 7, 2018 at 4:42 PM Hello Charlie, Congratulations on your "Win" here!! This lyric is a true pleasure to read. Most wondrously-conceived and most marvelously-expressed!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes, Gary Charlie Smith September 8, 2018 at 9:49 AM Thanks Garry...

Connie Marcum Wong August 23, 2018 at 3:20 PM A poet's poem Charlie! Lovely! Congratulations on your win. : ) Charlie Smith August 23, 2018 at 3:50 PM Thank you Connie...

Anil Deo August 13, 2018 at 4:54 PM O yes! This one hit it out of the park in Line 1, so perfect & original, yet emotionally rich. Then sustained all the way to the end. Glad the judge/s couldn't resist your lyrics. Amen & shalom Charlie Smith August 14, 2018 at 10:28 AM Thank you Anil...

Vladislav Raven August 13, 2018 at 10:28 AM Hi Charlie, seems like congratulations are in order for a win with this exceptional write. The imagery and the words sing Charlie. excellent write. This gem goes into my faves. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike. Charlie Smith August 13, 2018 at 10:35 AM Thanks so much Mike...

Larry Bradfield August 12, 2018 at 10:37 PM Well done, Charlie! Congratulations Charlie Smith August 13, 2018 at 10:18 AM Thank you Larry...

Curtis Johnson August 12, 2018 at 6:21 PM Congrats, Charlie. Charlie Smith August 13, 2018 at 10:18 AM Thank you Curtis...

Heidi Sands August 12, 2018 at 4:03 PM Beautiful Charlie. Congratulations for your win :) Charlie Smith August 13, 2018 at 10:17 AM Thank you Heidi...

John Hamilton August 12, 2018 at 1:25 PM So nice Charlie, congrats on a fine win! Charlie Smith August 12, 2018 at 3:18 PM Thank you very much John...

Pashang Salehi August 11, 2018 at 5:41 PM Beautifully done... Charlie Smith August 12, 2018 at 10:26 AM Thank you Pashang...

CayCay Godwin August 10, 2018 at 8:35 PM Oh, Charlie - I mean oh, oh, oh my, is this beautiful and beyond sweetness with lilting, lifting, touching bliss- imagery that determined I FAV this and save this and right now, RAVE about this. My poetry adrenaline and I are, at this moment, totally sated. Charlie, this is excellent writing! I'm in love with your poem ... CayCay Charlie Smith August 11, 2018 at 9:19 AM That is so very nice of you CayCay, Thank You...

Andrea Dietrich August 10, 2018 at 6:12 PM I love this one, so short and sweet!! Charlie Smith August 11, 2018 at 9:18 AM Thank you Andrea...

Arturo Michael August 10, 2018 at 1:20 PM Really nice ... filled with love...A breeze one...All the best Charlie Charlie Smith August 10, 2018 at 1:42 PM Thanks Arturo...

Vijay Pandit August 10, 2018 at 12:21 PM Enjoyed reading your delightful lyrics--well done, Charlie. All the best! Charlie Smith August 10, 2018 at 1:38 PM Thank you Vijay...

Susan Ashley August 10, 2018 at 12:09 PM Your poem is as rapturous as a summer breeze, Charlie. Light and lilting and ever so lovely.. Best wishes for a win my friend.. ~Susan Charlie Smith August 10, 2018 at 1:35 PM Thank you Susan...