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Soft lights with warm winds pirouetting in time whispering its music so perfectly in rhyme Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess Moonlight in concert reflecting its bliss Starlight's twinkle, a pretentious first kiss Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess The concert of summer called gently your name Softly, by this music into my life you came Hearts searching, ever searching for love's sweet caress Wishing, ever hoping, to so tenderly possess. 08/10/2018 Summer Breeze Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 10/7/2019 8:21:00 PM
Hello Charlie. That's a good read. From very first line alliteration started. ?? searching for love and concert of summer are lovely. The refrain worked here and it suits nicely. Keep in touch.
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Date: 9/7/2018 4:42:00 PM
Hello Charlie, Congratulations on your "Win" here!! This lyric is a true pleasure to read. Most wondrously-conceived and most marvelously-expressed!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 9/8/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Garry...
Date: 8/23/2018 3:20:00 PM
A poet's poem Charlie! Lovely! Congratulations on your win. : )
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Date: 8/23/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 8/20/2018 12:43:00 PM
"warm winds pirouetting in time"...very nice, Charlie.
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Date: 8/21/2018 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Jim...
Date: 8/15/2018 8:02:00 AM
Beautifuly written, tender lyrics, Charlie. Congratulations on your win in the contest. T.J
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Teppo...
Date: 8/13/2018 4:54:00 PM
O yes! This one hit it out of the park in Line 1, so perfect & original, yet emotionally rich. Then sustained all the way to the end. Glad the judge/s couldn't resist your lyrics. Amen & shalom
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Anil...
Date: 8/13/2018 10:28:00 AM
Hi Charlie, seems like congratulations are in order for a win with this exceptional write. The imagery and the words sing Charlie. excellent write. This gem goes into my faves. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 8/13/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike...
Date: 8/12/2018 10:37:00 PM
Well done, Charlie! Congratulations
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Date: 8/13/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Larry...
Date: 8/12/2018 6:21:00 PM
Congrats, Charlie.
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Date: 8/13/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Curtis...
Date: 8/12/2018 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful Charlie. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 8/13/2018 10:17:00 AM
Thank you Heidi...
Date: 8/12/2018 1:25:00 PM
So nice Charlie, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 8/12/2018 3:18:00 PM
Thank you very much John...
Date: 8/11/2018 5:41:00 PM
Beautifully done...
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Date: 8/12/2018 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Pashang...
Date: 8/10/2018 8:35:00 PM
Oh, Charlie - I mean oh, oh, oh my, is this beautiful and beyond sweetness with lilting, lifting, touching bliss- imagery that determined I FAV this and save this and right now, RAVE about this. My poetry adrenaline and I are, at this moment, totally sated. Charlie, this is excellent writing! I'm in love with your poem ... CayCay
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:19:00 AM
That is so very nice of you CayCay, Thank You...
Date: 8/10/2018 6:12:00 PM
I love this one, so short and sweet!!
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 8/10/2018 1:20:00 PM
Really nice ... filled with love...A breeze one...All the best Charlie
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Date: 8/10/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Arturo...
Date: 8/10/2018 12:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your delightful lyrics--well done, Charlie. All the best!
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Date: 8/10/2018 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...
Date: 8/10/2018 12:09:00 PM
Your poem is as rapturous as a summer breeze, Charlie. Light and lilting and ever so lovely.. Best wishes for a win my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/10/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Susan...