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Summer Break Complacency

I’ve been faking but complacency’s fading latency is blatantly shaking me. These cold cascading seconds trickle off the clock that faces me. its hands strangle me, choke me and break me, while rhythmic ticks and tocks sedate me. It’s the reason that I ask you to wake me before I forsake these dreams. The gleam in my eyes is turning into a glaze, it seems… These chains bind me to stagnancy, and when I attempt to break the shackles they rattle and laugh at me It’s a disaster, this self-induced mastery - A slave to a state of being just breathing… Just breathing. And it’s a seething existence without persistence; when listless wishing keeps us from going the distance. So if you miss it or are met with resistance, simply call for assistance. We all need some reliance - That’s the science. So maybe a good friend holds the key to free me. to see me through the debris of a shattering defeat. Nothing will beat me Nothing will keep these feet from advancing fleetly allowing me to do more than just coast by like a ghost, non-descendent of the Most-High Please wake me before I forsake these dreams. This gleam in my eyes is turning into a glaze, it seems. But I’ll break from these seams and hope for a better day, because when I turn the corner, I know I’ll find another way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/3/2010 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Ryan. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:22:00 PM
Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/28/2010 6:48:00 PM
Ryan, very well written interesting poem -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ryan. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:51:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:08:00 PM
Indeed there is always another way and another day. Great write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Caroline.
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Date: 8/27/2009 10:44:00 AM
I like your style, Ryan! You've got a lot to say and you say it well. Write on! Donna
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Date: 8/27/2009 1:29:00 AM
I like next to the last stanza. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/26/2009 11:54:00 PM
i want to find another way.well penned verses,just love it--charma
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Date: 8/26/2009 12:45:00 PM
I absolutely love the rhythm and the imagery of this poem! Thank you for sharing your gift as well! :D
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Date: 8/24/2009 5:09:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Ryan. Wishing you the best always in your writing. Love, Carol
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