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Summer Beauty

Natural beauty that makes eyes glisten with love, lust, desire Makes hearts beat faster, fear, ache, break, fall in love An inner beauty of spirit and kindness, giving, wanting to please Wanting to be loved, fearing rejection, heart breaking, wondering why Too gentle to understand true jealousy and envy Too trusting, always giving, making people happy Whilst inside aching, wondering why me Just wanting to be happy, to please Holding nothing for herself, only an emptiness Beautiful words pour from her pen Fuelled by her longing and heartache Yet the smile remains, with eyes you want to fall into The dream of many, who don’t see the sadness The dream of one, who see's all.

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2015 9:05:00 AM

This is so beautifully written David - I wonder if this is a tribute in some way to someone here ... but whatever the reason for the write it is really lovely :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2015 10:16:00 AM

So glad I was on the right track :-) Hugs Jan xx I know from here how attached we can get to people we have never met:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mcsorley
Date: 5/13/2015 10:14:00 AM

Thank you Jan coming from you that means alot to me. It's not someone here but someone I was chatting to on another social media site. It meant alot at the time I wrote it. :-) oxox Dave

Wally Flint

Date: 4/18/2015 8:42:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem very much David. Nice work!

David Mcsorley
Date: 5/12/2015 6:59:00 AM

Thank you Wally, you're very kind