Doris Culverhouse Poet Tanka

Summer Beauty

Belly laughs and thrills
Water park fun temptations
Lasting summer sun
The beauty of family
Together screams of delight!

**Tanka for the A memory of beauty contest/missed the deadline

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Juan Paolo Galua August 13, 2010 at 4:05 AM just love to imagine this one DOris...thanks for sharing...I miss my family...tears...^_^ v

Joe Maverick August 10, 2010 at 6:30 AM Not familiar with Tanka however, most enjoyable. Thank you for your interest in mine.

Raj Nandy August 9, 2010 at 7:36 AM A NICE POEM DORIS ! I am gettin E-mail messages that my poetry is being featured this week ! Can you tell me what that means , as I am still new to this site ? Thanks ! -Raj

Wilma Neels August 7, 2010 at 5:49 AM A warm memory you captured in this poem Doris, thank you for your comments on my work.. Can just imagine the trauma of having to explain that to your son at that particular age hey.. :) Tc Wilma

Gert W. Knop August 6, 2010 at 11:56 PM Very vivid Tanka, Doris, enjoey the write! And thank you for commenting 'Karlovy Vary'...Gert

Caroline Cécile Delacroix August 6, 2010 at 10:12 PM Very nice Tanka, Doris! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Caroline.

Virginia Mitchell August 6, 2010 at 4:07 PM I smile, thinking of the fun family times in your well done tanks. : )

Lynette Chachere August 6, 2010 at 12:57 PM yay, sounds fun.too bad they took away wet n' wild in las vegas.waters great(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Jessica Arteaga August 6, 2010 at 11:47 AM great is the feeling of family good times c: lovely poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 6, 2010 at 11:33 AM Luv those screams of delight.. especially on the rollercoaster.... or seaslide.. fabulous write Doris..good luck in Rick's contest.. my entry is FREE..luv..happy weekend..

Carolyn Devonshire August 6, 2010 at 11:32 AM Delightful memory, Doris! Best wishes in the contest. I love water parks, too. Love, Carolyn