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Summer Appetite

On a summer’s day, Drowsily as I lay; On my soft bed, On an empty head; Eating all the muffins away! 'Summer Laziness' Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mohan Chutani Written and Submitted on: 05/06/2020

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Date: 6/22/2020 1:08:00 AM
This is one mouth-watering limerick Jhinuk! I so wish to have muffins today. Congratulations on your win :)
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Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/24/2020 1:52:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 6/18/2020 8:37:00 PM
Jhinuk, very clever limerick--on an empty head, eating all muffins away, on a summer day. We all enjoy doing that when our heads and ofcourse stomachs also are empty. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.
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Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/24/2020 1:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for this honour. I'm overwhelmed.
Date: 6/18/2020 7:44:00 PM
Nice to see a win today for your muffin poem, Jhinuk! Congratulations ~ John
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Date: 6/17/2020 9:56:00 PM
Aw! Me, back again. Sounds like a serene summer scene! Lovely! :) gw
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Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/18/2020 11:55:00 AM
Thanks a lot
Date: 6/11/2020 8:03:00 PM
Hope our comments don't frighten you, Miss Muffin, away! lol. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jhinuk! Enjoyed your limerick! So cute! :) Gershon
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Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/14/2020 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for bringing out that reference. Your comment is so touching.
Date: 6/6/2020 1:08:00 AM
This so nicely describes the lazy feelings of summer. Well done, Jhinuk.
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Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/6/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 6/5/2020 6:19:00 PM
very cute, Jhinuk! thanks for visiting my poetry recently.
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Jhinuk Mukherjee
Date: 6/6/2020 8:55:00 AM
It was a pleasure reading yours. And thank you.