Summer Appetite

On a summer’s day, 
Drowsily as I lay;
On my soft bed, 
On an empty head;
Eating all the muffins away! 


'Summer Laziness' Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani
Written and Submitted on: 05/06/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 5:30 AM
I can picture it; and I taste the muffins.
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:08 AM
This is one mouth-watering limerick Jhinuk! I so wish to have muffins today. Congratulations on your win :)
Mukherjee Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 1:52 AM
Thank you so much.
Chutani Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 8:37 PM
Jhinuk, very clever limerick--on an empty head, eating all muffins away, on a summer day. We all enjoy doing that when our heads and ofcourse stomachs also are empty. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.
Mukherjee Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 1:52 AM
Thank you so much for this honour. I'm overwhelmed.
Watt Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Nice to see a win today for your muffin poem, Jhinuk! Congratulations ~ John
Wolf Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 9:56 PM
Aw! Me, back again. Sounds like a serene summer scene! Lovely! :) gw
Mukherjee Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 11:55 AM
Thanks a lot
Wolf Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 8:03 PM
Hope our comments don't frighten you, Miss Muffin, away! lol. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jhinuk! Enjoyed your limerick! So cute! :) Gershon
Mukherjee Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Thank you so much for bringing out that reference. Your comment is so touching.
Watt Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:08 AM
This so nicely describes the lazy feelings of summer. Well done, Jhinuk.
Mukherjee Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Thank you so much
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 6:19 PM
very cute, Jhinuk! thanks for visiting my poetry recently.
Mukherjee Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 8:55 AM
It was a pleasure reading yours. And thank you.
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