Summer

Summer night, dogs bite, par for the course old fellow, river down, flooded town, Yellow Belly were, biting are, Jewfish sure are sorrowful, huh. 12-jul-11 Don Johnson Francines contest Summer night tanka

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Jessica Vh

Date: 7/25/2011 5:55:00 PM

Love it! =) The last line is so peculiarly wonderful."Jewfish" I wonder...?

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/16/2011 7:28:00 PM

witty and soulful, your poetry is always an art form....good one Aussie Gent! Thanks for you kind and gracious comments on Harlequin....Later mate....Old Jack

Elaine George

Date: 7/13/2011 4:24:00 AM

Great Tanka, Don. Best wishes in Francines, contest. Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/12/2011 2:52:00 PM

LOL...if you lived in the inner city you'd be a rap star!!! [sure sounds like summer!] Light & Love

Don Johnson
Date: 7/13/2011 1:52:00 AM

Well babe I have more than 200 crappy verses on youtube johnsondon2...preminition promotion :)