summer

summer fades away
	as fall emerges refreshed ~ 
		flora take succor
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Volumes Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:58 PM
Wonderful Haiku Laf. You are so good at them.
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:27 PM
Are you still up? Thank you for the encouraging words my friend! :)
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 4:52 AM
How seamlessly this haiku flows is beyond beautiful to every readers eye, im sure. I love how you started with “ summer fades away” and mentioned how fall falls in. Gorgeous and soul warming… so refreshing
Fowler Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 5:49 AM
You are kind with your thoughtful comments. Thank you for visiting...so nice. :)
Brotherton Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 6:06 PM
A great Haiku about summer's surrender to fall.
Fowler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Thank you Jerry! It's always great to see you! :)
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September 10, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Fall means goodbye for now to flora and fauna, but look at the beauty that autumn gives us in exchange... And, you just gave us the same kind of loveliness with this poem... Nicely done, Linda :)
Fowler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 4:58 PM
Hi Kelly. Nice to see you and many thanks. Yes, such beauty in Autumn - a favorite time of year when all finds relieve from Summer heat and goes dormant, taking refuge until Spring.
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