Summer

summer fades away as fall emerges refreshed ~ flora take succor

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/11/2023 1:58:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Laf. You are so good at them.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/11/2023 3:27:00 PM

Are you still up? Thank you for the encouraging words my friend! :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/11/2023 4:52:00 AM

How seamlessly this haiku flows is beyond beautiful to every readers eye, im sure. I love how you started with “ summer fades away” and mentioned how fall falls in. Gorgeous and soul warming… so refreshing

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/11/2023 5:49:00 AM

You are kind with your thoughtful comments. Thank you for visiting...so nice. :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/10/2023 6:06:00 PM

A great Haiku about summer's surrender to fall.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2023 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Jerry! It's always great to see you! :)

Tom Woody

Date: 9/10/2023 4:22:00 PM

Lovely seasonal haiku

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2023 5:00:00 PM

Thank you Tom. Nice to see you here. I always appreciate your kind comments! :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/10/2023 4:04:00 PM

Fall means goodbye for now to flora and fauna, but look at the beauty that autumn gives us in exchange... And, you just gave us the same kind of loveliness with this poem... Nicely done, Linda :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2023 4:58:00 PM

Hi Kelly. Nice to see you and many thanks. Yes, such beauty in Autumn - a favorite time of year when all finds relieve from Summer heat and goes dormant, taking refuge until Spring.