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Summer

crimson July mists
in the sea breeze, two kites sail~
gulls watch the seashore

3rd Place Contest Winner
 

written: June 23, 2022

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Summer Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 8:30 PM
Back to your poem to Congratulate you on your win, dear friend !
Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 12:40 PM
Back with congrats on this winner. I enjoyed reading it again. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 4:45 PM
a beautiful scene you painted. Congrats.
Kitchin Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku!
Alex Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 4:48 AM
Beautiful scene painted. Congratulations!
Baker Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 10:50 AM
I like you chance for a win, Lasaad. Good Haiku. Bill
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Reads like a nice beach day. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Buehler Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 10:55 AM
The tranquil seashore is beautifully imagined in this glorious haiku, Lasaad. :)
George Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Soothing to the eye and the mind are these summer scenes, Lasaad
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 4:25 PM
Enjoyed the images of summer, Lasaad. Best to you.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 3:28 PM
Hello Lassard, this is a beautiful summer poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 3:00 PM
Nice first line, Lasaad!
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