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Summer

Sun’s soulful smile swells boundlessly
while the sky mirrors the clear blue sea.

Seashore blends with the ebbs’ rolling voices
Sifting, swaying to and fro
as beach-goers barge in.

Humid air blows gently around
On white dunes with parasol mounts
Picnics with lots of fun abound
Excursionists are hard to count.

ice cream and cold drinks
available everywhere…
hot season’s specials


April 1, 2022   1.54pm


(Forms: Crystalline- Kimo- Quatrain- haiku)

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Komal Walimbe Date: 5/16/2022 5:49:00 AM Wonderful write! And wonderful imagery!Have a great day Len!:) Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 5/19/2022 5:54:00 AM Wow! Thank you so much my new friend. I appreciate your precious time stopping by. Have a great day too. God bless you. Hugs back to you.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/13/2022 10:40:00 AM What a fun write. I love the beach/water. I wish, I had an ice cream and was walking the sand in your beach write. Have a great/blessed day.................... Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 5/19/2022 5:53:00 AM Belated Thanks. God bless you always my dear friend. Hugs back to you.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/4/2022 5:24:00 PM a wonderful description of what is MY favorite season! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 5/19/2022 5:53:00 AM Belated Thanks. God bless you always. Hugs back to you dear friend.

Bill Baker Date: 4/3/2022 5:11:00 PM Good imagery and descriptions, Len. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 5/19/2022 5:52:00 AM Belated thanks my dear friend. God bless you always. Hugs back to you

Valsa George Date: 4/3/2022 5:24:00 AM A wonderful beach scene in summer ! Beautifully composed, dear friend, Len ! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 5/19/2022 5:51:00 AM Belated Thanks. God bless you always my dear friend. Hugs back to you.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/1/2022 10:30:00 AM Hello Len Gasun, I just read this poem. It is beautifully done. I am making it my fav. Enjoy your day my dear friend. Darlene. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/3/2022 2:54:00 PM Hello Len , you are welcome. You are welcome for both. Thank you Len God bless you always to. Hugs. Len Gasun Date: 4/3/2022 4:14:00 AM Oh..thank you so much my dear friend Darlene for acknowledging this poem as one of your faves and your loving support. God bless you always. Hugs

Eve Roper Date: 4/1/2022 12:58:00 AM You sound like your at the beach relaxing. Nicely done, great visual . Blessings my dear with lots of inspiration Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 4/1/2022 1:24:00 AM Thank you dear Eve, Hugs