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Sun’s soulful smile swells boundlessly while the sky mirrors the clear blue sea. Seashore blends with the ebbs’ rolling voices Sifting, swaying to and fro as beach-goers barge in. Humid air blows gently around On white dunes with parasol mounts Picnics with lots of fun abound Excursionists are hard to count. ice cream and cold drinks available everywhere… hot season’s specials April 1, 2022 1.54pm
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Date: 5/16/2022 5:49:00 AM
Wonderful write! And wonderful imagery!Have a great day Len!:)
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/19/2022 5:54:00 AM
Wow! Thank you so much my new friend. I appreciate your precious time stopping by. Have a great day too. God bless you. Hugs back to you.
Date: 4/13/2022 10:40:00 AM
What a fun write. I love the beach/water. I wish, I had an ice cream and was walking the sand in your beach write. Have a great/blessed day....................
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/19/2022 5:53:00 AM
Belated Thanks. God bless you always my dear friend. Hugs back to you.
Date: 4/4/2022 5:24:00 PM
a wonderful description of what is MY favorite season!
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/19/2022 5:53:00 AM
Belated Thanks. God bless you always. Hugs back to you dear friend.
Date: 4/3/2022 5:11:00 PM
Good imagery and descriptions, Len. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/19/2022 5:52:00 AM
Belated thanks my dear friend. God bless you always. Hugs back to you
Date: 4/3/2022 5:24:00 AM
A wonderful beach scene in summer ! Beautifully composed, dear friend, Len !
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Len Gasun
Date: 5/19/2022 5:51:00 AM
Belated Thanks. God bless you always my dear friend. Hugs back to you.
Date: 4/1/2022 10:30:00 AM
Hello Len Gasun, I just read this poem. It is beautifully done. I am making it my fav. Enjoy your day my dear friend. Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/3/2022 2:54:00 PM
Hello Len , you are welcome. You are welcome for both. Thank you Len God bless you always to. Hugs.
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/3/2022 4:14:00 AM
Oh..thank you so much my dear friend Darlene for acknowledging this poem as one of your faves and your loving support. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 4/1/2022 12:58:00 AM
You sound like your at the beach relaxing. Nicely done, great visual . Blessings my dear with lots of inspiration
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/1/2022 1:24:00 AM
Thank you dear Eve, Hugs

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