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summer's garden walk sound of hummer in cool air .... empty spider web

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Date: 8/11/2021 10:13:00 AM
last line is a zinger.
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Date: 8/9/2021 6:15:00 AM
Perfect haiku, Sara. Your poem brings the real feel of summer. Love ~ Mala
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2021 3:32:00 AM
Malabika, Your visit is uplifting. Sara
Date: 7/27/2021 2:40:00 PM
He leaves behind his home when a giant hummer shows up…lol
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Date: 7/27/2021 3:07:00 PM
Kim, I think he is afraid of that tiny beak. Thanks for dropping by with a nice comment. Sara
Date: 7/26/2021 5:42:00 PM
Now THIS is a haiku!!!
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Date: 7/27/2021 3:47:00 AM
Thanks for the nice comment, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 7/26/2021 3:50:00 PM
Hi Sara, Your haiku and photo complemented each other well. Spider webs are a fascinating sight, but a spider on the hand is something else. I am terrified of them. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 4:06:00 PM
Alexis, Thanks for the nice comment on my work. I don't like the web on me nor do I like spiders even though I know they eat other insects that can be a worse menace. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 7/26/2021 1:45:00 AM
Alway drawn to poems that have a spider web, this haiku is engaging...Delice
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Date: 7/26/2021 2:03:00 PM
Delice, Thanks. Those webs are sticky and draw a person in. Your visit is appreciated. Sara
Date: 7/25/2021 6:24:00 PM
Oh, the empty spider web, it showed up in my house. Great Haiku, Sara. Soup mail. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2021 3:52:00 AM
Eve, I had one inside my house but the spider was so small that it was almost invisible and there were three dead bugs on the floor beneath the web. The dead bugs were what got my attention then I walked into the web, oh! gross. Thanks for the visit and the mail. Sara
Date: 7/25/2021 9:19:00 AM
Lovely summer scene, we're still enjoying a heatwave in the uk., thankfully its cooled down at the moment. Hope your weekend is going well Sara. Tom
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2021 3:45:00 AM
Tom, It has been getting hotter and hotter here. I don't like the heat of summer. It doesn't agree with me at all now. I don't go out in it unless I have to now. It doesn't take me long to give over heated. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Date: 7/25/2021 8:12:00 AM
A beautiful haiku, Sara! Blessings, Kim M
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2021 3:43:00 AM
Ahhh, Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the visit and the blessing I needed it. Sara
Date: 7/25/2021 7:05:00 AM
This is beautifully written Sara! I love it :) and a FAVE too !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/25/2021 7:22:00 AM
Heidi, I feel honored that you would fav it ..Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 7/25/2021 6:39:00 AM
Doesn't seem much cool these days, not with temperatures over 90 F.
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Date: 7/25/2021 6:57:00 AM
Victor, It was about 72 degrees Fahrenheit this morning but of course, it will be in the upper nineties this afternoon with added humidity will put it in the low hundreds. Thank God for the morning coolness though. Sara

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