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Summer

A ripened plum, still warmed to touch 
and taste of summer sun.

Half ripe tomatoes, breathed with greenhouse opened door 
before the senses gather more when picked, 
firm at first, then squelched between the lips 
shooting sideways, some dribbled pips.

Cherries, on their wishbone stalks, 
give stolen pleasure sweet and brief,
just in reach on shady summer walks where overhanging branch 
holds ruby treasures for the cherry thief.

Skylark, a solitary speck in cloudless sky 
seen when lying in the meadow flowers, 
so high, so hard to see with naked eye,
yet clear to ear while lazing passing hours, 
and with closing eyes, as if nearby. 

Summer breeze, teasing face with whisps of hair. 
Bare arms, bare legs tickled in the waving grass, 
seduced by soft caress, 
summer's touch of gentle stroking air. 

Muscles loose and eyelids rest. 
Breath breathes in and breath breathes out,
and, with every parting breath, leaves last remaining care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hoffman Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 10:12 AM
A beautiful summer poem, Bob! I can feel the summer breeze.
Kimmerling Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Thanks for the encouragement Franci. I am experimenting with being evocative. I have just followed up with something similar: Summer stream. Hope you can see and feel that one too. I see that your own lovely short lines do the same.
Eckley Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Great poem, Bob. Sensuous and evocative! Brilliant imagery. Raich
Kimmerling Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 1:28 AM
Thank you Raich. It's surprising where you can wander during lockdown, with eyes shut indoors. Bless you for your encouragement
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Hello Bob Kimmerling, a beautiful summer poem you have created. Enjoy yourday my friend.
Pandey Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 11:59 PM
Wonderful poem, it help us to enjoy each moment of summer, and this line "Half ripe tomatoes, breathed with greenhouse opened door before the senses gather more when picked, firm at first, then squelched between the lips shooting sideways, some dribbled pips." Shows your deep observation of summer.
Wolf Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Such lovely, remembered images of summer, Bob. Stanzas to savor! Happy Summer, Gershon
Kimmerling Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Happy summer in return Gershon. This one cane out of nowhere a couple of mornings ago. Maybe something to do with our funniest May on record. Thanks for the encouragement
Zabeko Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 6:20 PM
Such a great poem
Kimmerling Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 1:53 PM
Why bless you Axiole. Thanks for kind words.
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