Summer

A hot and humid day floats merrily on the seas
As tiny bikinis amble in sandy footprints
And frolic in the motives of soft ocean breeze 
Building sand-castle dreams with playful hints

Hazy hues occupy the environs of a blue sky 
As pouring rains flood the tapestry on the arc
When hurriedly blue herons lift-up and fly
Escaping before the flash of a thunderous spark

In a floral garden tempt lavender intimations
Where nearing their beehives honeybees swarm
Skipping the ambiance of fiery red carnations
Subdued by sudden outburst of a fleeting storm

Above the horizon now rainbow colors sprout
Glorifying the moodiness of this season's reign--
Gloominess takes its place when sun opts out
As sunshine comes and goes, and so does the rain

The long day cedes to evening, buzzing in the park
And there by the sidewalks pink rose-blooms sway
Charmed by the bird songs in mating calls of lark
As sunset paints ruby tinges upon a golden display

May 12, 2019
HM: Your choice contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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George Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 3:54 AM
Charmed by the melange of summer scenes, like girls in bikni making sand castles in the beach, flying herons, red carnations, people ambling in the park etc etc. Lovely !
Theraven Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Vijay, This poem reminds of so many fine long days, and quick footed shelter runs from summer storms. -Richard
Romios Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Perfect Panagiota
Mukherjee Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Really wonderful, Vijay. Many congratulations to you...
Pandit Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Much appreciate..many thanks.
Carber Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Nicely done Vijay--congrats!
Pandit Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Much appreciate L.J...many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:35 PM
An Artist paints his words in the sky once again. That creator being YOU. :) Congratulations Vijay, on this win. I am soaring in your vivid colors. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 2:41 PM
You are so very kind..much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 5:28 PM
Vijay Pandit, oh this sounds like a lovely summer. I can see this scene before me. have a nice evening my friend.
Pandit Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Much appreciate Darlene..many thanks.
Ibeh Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Wonderful poem! Congrats on your win, Vijay:-)
Pandit Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Thank you Edward--much appreciate.
Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 1:19 PM
Congrats on your win, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Line.
Walimbe Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 8:31 AM
nice written!
Pandit Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Komal.
B. Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 5:57 AM
An amazing write, Vijay.. Excellent imagery !! Perfectly described and detailed.. It enhances the way I adore summer. A fav for me, my friend.. Have a blessed day..
Pandit Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Robertina..much appreciate. A special thank you for the FAV.
Hoffman Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 6:13 PM
This is truly delightful and the imagery is stunning. Bravo!
Pandit Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 7:18 AM
Thank you Franci--much appreciate.
Sands Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 5:45 PM
Congratulations for climbing high on the list Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 7:18 AM
Thank you Heidi--I didn't notice.. it moved up quickly..much appreciate your support, as always.
Ball Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:48 PM
So beautiful Vijay. My happy place in summer is my back yard garden. I sit on my garden swing and listen to the buzz of bees and smell my flowers. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Enjoy your happy place..a blessing when it's in your background. Much appreciate Judy..many thanks.
Kiser Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 2:05 PM
A very tranquil read; I have melted into the warmth of it.
Pandit Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Much appreciate MLK..many thanks.
Romios Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 10:39 PM
You just painted summer for me. Best wishes Panagiota
Pandit Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Many thanks, Panagiota.
May Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 9:20 AM
The many moods of summer depicted well...Best wishes in the contest Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Much appreciate Joseph..many thanks.
Callus Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Beautiful imagery which captures our senses, Vijay. Describing scenes in normal words can be a delight to red, but being able to do it with poetic artistry is another. Well done, my friend. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 3:01 PM
Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Paul.
Proxenos Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Hi Vijay , this is a sure win my friend - - love the lines in the last verse - the long day cedes to evening, buzzing in the park - and the sidewalks where pink rose-blooms sway - you paint a picture of enticing summer months! Well penned Vijay. Hugs, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 7:44 AM
You are indeed so kind, Jennifer..much appreciate your visit and comments..many many thanks.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 5:26 AM
"As sunset paints ruby tinges upon a golden display" you paint with your poetic brush a portrait of Summer adorned with the colours of your feel.. fascinating, as you always do, your ardent reader with the unique beauty of your poetry.. Summer is far more alluring with your masterful pen, dear Vijay! I fave your ruby and wish you the best of luck in the contest. My deepest regards. God bless you.
Pandit Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Always so deeply rewarding to read your comments, Besma. You uplift Poetry Soup with your presence..and with your visits and words..much appreciate, as always..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAV. Regards!!
Sands Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Wow! An amazing poem this is. Beautiful to read today. We have missed spring this year and it is still in the 30's. I am dreaming about your poem! :)
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Thank you Heidi..always a pleasure to read your comments..many thanks.
Awtry Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:10 AM
the words are as beautiful as the picture! Well done! Best of luck in the contests :)
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 4:46 PM
Much appreciate..many thanks, PSA.
Canerdy Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:44 AM
Vijay, you have created a masterpiece for Caren's contest! Janice
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:03 AM
You are so kind, Janice..much appreciate..many many thanks.
Kiser Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:07 AM
A very beautiful, tranquil read; good luck in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Appreciate your visit, as always..many thanks MLK.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Lovely piece and mood.
Pandit Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Many thanks Richard..much appreciate.
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