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Summer-Tameless

summer-tameless cool wetness made wild steady heaves pallid filed heads ~~ white horses edged sea 2021 June 28 *2nd Place* Summer Haiku ~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2021 July 03

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/5/2021 9:29:00 AM

Back with Ho'omaikai' 'ana (hope I said that correctly) William. I love the imagery. Also love the black lava beaches! Aloha hoaloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/5/2021 10:04:00 AM

I appreciate your return and generous expressions, Sam, if you replace the 'H' with a 'P', it would mean 'Blessings' ka'u hoaaloha, Aloha!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/5/2021 6:17:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/5/2021 9:27:00 AM

Thanks, Beata, I appreciate you my friend, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2021 12:12:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/4/2021 12:18:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise, tho' not much snow in Hawaii, we do melt my friend, Aloha!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/3/2021 8:04:00 PM

William, congrats on your win with this creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/3/2021 8:33:00 PM

Always a joy, Kim, reading your words of comfort my friend, Aloha!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/3/2021 1:22:00 PM

William, congratulations on your winning placement, love the imagery and movement in this one!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/3/2021 2:54:00 PM

White steeds on our volcanic black beaches as surging waves in contrast. Thank you, Tania, for the wondrous opportunity my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2021 10:10:00 AM

cool imagery, William. BIG congrats

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/3/2021 12:54:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, as to you and your wondrous squirrel -- mongooses in Hawaii, Aloha my friend!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/3/2021 9:54:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/3/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj, as to you as well for your peakish efforts my friend, Aloha!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/3/2021 6:22:00 AM

I can almost hear this piece. I have not seen the ocean in way too long. Gorgeous penning, congratulations on your win! xomo

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/3/2021 12:42:00 PM

Waves galloping like white steeds coming ashore. A hearty thanks, Mo, as to you as well for your heroine efforts that were nicely done my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/28/2021 4:25:00 PM

Very cool William! The image of sea foam left on the shore as "white horses." Enjoyed this so much. Aloha. Mahalo for sharing hoaloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/28/2021 5:13:00 PM

On my side of the island, great contrast between our volcanic black beaches and cresting waves. Thanks, Sam, for your mana'o (opinion/sharing), Aloha!