Sum of Me

Set me free, caged up mind.
I plead and ponder then rewind.

Thoughts play over and over.
Past, present, and future waver.

The sum of life is up to me.
Choose to surrender, I believe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Keep believing Erin. Vince
Fraser Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Clever write Erin>>James
Taylor Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 1:33 PM
very interesting read...I liked it
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