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Sultry Night

moon and stars above warm summer night breeze blowing arms wrapped around me closeness makes my body weak your breath, the warm breeze, I melt

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/21/2021 3:47:00 PM

What a beautiful brevity, Carol ~ salient points that make the perfect evening for sweethearts. It's lovely to see it printed in the pages of the 2020PS Anthology ~

Funom Makama

Date: 5/20/2016 6:41:00 AM

Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 3/31/2015 6:00:00 AM

Wow sunshine,love this you shine thanks..tonytocaa

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/31/2014 6:37:00 AM

This is lovely Carol

James Fraser

Date: 5/22/2014 2:07:00 PM

Dreamy night Carol, nice to read you again, James :)

Linda Jackson

Date: 4/23/2014 2:18:00 PM

I love the imagery in your poem. Nice romantic images. Best wishes Linda

David Pennington

Date: 4/6/2014 6:59:00 PM

warm summer night breeze draws me in. makes me wonder, is it the breeze or a lover which enfolds

Kolapo Olapoju

Date: 4/6/2014 3:42:00 PM

Short, precise, perfect....Much love Carol

Funom Makama

Date: 2/28/2014 10:46:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/30/2014 5:05:00 PM

Stirring the fires of romance with this beautiful sensitive piece. Loved it Carol!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/21/2014 11:19:00 PM

Beautiful poem Carol - it breeds warmth and good feeling.

Peter Dome

Date: 12/28/2013 12:50:00 PM

Enjoying your beautiful poetry tonight. very well done. best wishes. Pete.

Sekitto Kisakye

Date: 12/19/2013 8:46:00 AM

Carol, Thanks for this interesting piece. I love to introduce to you my brand new and released book of poetry, The Promise of my Dream ; The Best Ideas. It is available for sale at http://sbpra.com/sekittokisakye. You're one of those whom i dedicated this book to. You can visit that site and if possible spread a word about it to your friends and family. Merry x-mas and a prosperous new year. Love, Sekitto Kisakye

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/15/2013 5:16:00 PM

Just stopping by to say you are not forgotten and Happy Holidays. Light & Love

Chuck Melugin

Date: 11/29/2013 9:51:00 AM

I Melted! Great work

Sierra Arnold

Date: 11/17/2013 11:31:00 AM

Wonderful imagery. I felt like I was there. Beautifully written. Great job :)

Sierra Arnold

Date: 11/17/2013 11:30:00 AM

Wonderful imagery. I felt like I was there. Beautifully written. Great job :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/8/2013 1:03:00 AM

Beautiful. What a nice moment so nicely recalled.

Jerry Bolton

Date: 11/3/2013 12:50:00 PM

Ahhh . . . such images this small poem gave me as I read it, and a memory flashed into my thought of another warm summer night . . . and her. Thank you for helping me find that long lost memory., Carol.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/16/2013 8:11:00 PM

Just stopping by to say Hi this evening it's been too long since I have read a verse from you hope you are well and happy? Light & Love

Tobey Hill

Date: 10/11/2013 12:23:00 PM

very nice Carol....TAH

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/24/2013 9:13:00 PM

Sensous poem here! Have not heard from you in a while. How are you? Peace & Love Matthew Anish