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Sultry Night

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Sultry Night

moon and stars above
warm summer night breeze blowing
arms wrapped around me
closeness makes my body weak
your breath, the warm breeze, I melt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 5/20/2016 6:41:00 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
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Date: 3/31/2015 6:00:00 AM
Wow sunshine,love this you shine thanks..tonytocaa
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Date: 8/31/2014 6:37:00 AM
This is lovely Carol
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Date: 5/22/2014 2:07:00 PM
Dreamy night Carol, nice to read you again, James :)
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Date: 4/23/2014 2:18:00 PM
I love the imagery in your poem. Nice romantic images. Best wishes Linda
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Date: 4/6/2014 6:59:00 PM
warm summer night breeze draws me in. makes me wonder, is it the breeze or a lover which enfolds
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Date: 4/6/2014 3:42:00 PM
Short, precise, perfect....Much love Carol
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Date: 2/28/2014 10:46:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Date: 1/30/2014 5:05:00 PM
Stirring the fires of romance with this beautiful sensitive piece. Loved it Carol!
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Date: 1/21/2014 11:19:00 PM
Beautiful poem Carol - it breeds warmth and good feeling.
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Date: 12/28/2013 12:50:00 PM
Enjoying your beautiful poetry tonight. very well done. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 12/19/2013 8:46:00 AM
Carol, Thanks for this interesting piece. I love to introduce to you my brand new and released book of poetry, The Promise of my Dream ; The Best Ideas. It is available for sale at http://sbpra.com/sekittokisakye. You're one of those whom i dedicated this book to. You can visit that site and if possible spread a word about it to your friends and family. Merry x-mas and a prosperous new year. Love, Sekitto Kisakye
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Date: 12/15/2013 5:16:00 PM
Just stopping by to say you are not forgotten and Happy Holidays. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2013 9:51:00 AM
I Melted! Great work
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:31:00 AM
Wonderful imagery. I felt like I was there. Beautifully written. Great job :)
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:30:00 AM
Wonderful imagery. I felt like I was there. Beautifully written. Great job :)
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Date: 11/8/2013 1:03:00 AM
Beautiful. What a nice moment so nicely recalled.
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Date: 11/3/2013 12:50:00 PM
Ahhh . . . such images this small poem gave me as I read it, and a memory flashed into my thought of another warm summer night . . . and her. Thank you for helping me find that long lost memory., Carol.
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Date: 10/16/2013 8:11:00 PM
Just stopping by to say Hi this evening it's been too long since I have read a verse from you hope you are well and happy? Light & Love
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Date: 10/11/2013 12:23:00 PM
very nice Carol....TAH
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:13:00 PM
Sensous poem here! Have not heard from you in a while. How are you? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/18/2013 6:36:00 PM
Hi Carol; Sorry I have not been around much, but for a while I was very sick. I'm alright now. Nice poem for the contest..... Lucilla
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Date: 9/1/2013 10:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Carol. Loved this!!! Huggs, Maggie Mae
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Date: 8/17/2013 2:06:00 AM
Another very well written poem! Nice job Carol!
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Date: 8/9/2013 12:12:00 PM
I could write the next five lines, if you give me the assurance that you'll melt, again!
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