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Sultry Night

moon and stars above
warm summer night breeze blowing
arms wrapped around me
closeness makes my body weak
your breath, the warm breeze, I melt

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Line Gauthier

January 21, 2021 at 3:47 PM

What a beautiful brevity, Carol ~ salient points that make the perfect evening for sweethearts. It's lovely to see it printed in the pages of the 2020PS Anthology ~

Funom Makama

May 20, 2016 at 6:41 AM

Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.

Tonytocaa Camacho

March 31, 2015 at 6:00 AM

Wow sunshine,love this you shine thanks..tonytocaa

Harry Horsman

August 31, 2014 at 6:37 AM

This is lovely Carol

James Fraser

May 22, 2014 at 2:07 PM

Dreamy night Carol, nice to read you again, James :)

Linda Jackson

April 23, 2014 at 2:18 PM

I love the imagery in your poem. Nice romantic images. Best wishes Linda

David Pennington

April 6, 2014 at 6:59 PM

warm summer night breeze draws me in. makes me wonder, is it the breeze or a lover which enfolds

Kolapo Olapoju

April 6, 2014 at 3:42 PM

Short, precise, perfect....Much love Carol

Funom Makama

February 28, 2014 at 10:46 AM

Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

Connie Marcum Wong

January 30, 2014 at 5:05 PM

Stirring the fires of romance with this beautiful sensitive piece. Loved it Carol!

Vicky Tsiluma

January 21, 2014 at 11:19 PM

Beautiful poem Carol - it breeds warmth and good feeling.

Peter Dome

December 28, 2013 at 12:50 PM

Enjoying your beautiful poetry tonight. very well done. best wishes. Pete.

Sekitto Herbert Grace

December 19, 2013 at 8:46 AM

Carol, Thanks for this interesting piece. I love to introduce to you my brand new and released book of poetry, The Promise of my Dream ; The Best Ideas. It is available for sale at http://sbpra.com/sekittokisakye. You're one of those whom i dedicated this book to. You can visit that site and if possible spread a word about it to your friends and family. Merry x-mas and a prosperous new year. Love, Sekitto Kisakye

Debbie Guzzi

December 15, 2013 at 5:16 PM

Just stopping by to say you are not forgotten and Happy Holidays. Light & Love

Chuck Melugin

November 29, 2013 at 9:51 AM

I Melted! Great work

Sierra Arnold

November 17, 2013 at 11:31 AM

Wonderful imagery. I felt like I was there. Beautifully written. Great job :)

Sierra Arnold

November 17, 2013 at 11:30 AM

Wonderful imagery. I felt like I was there. Beautifully written. Great job :)

Scott Thirtyseven

November 8, 2013 at 1:03 AM

Beautiful. What a nice moment so nicely recalled.

Jerry Bolton

November 3, 2013 at 12:50 PM

Ahhh . . . such images this small poem gave me as I read it, and a memory flashed into my thought of another warm summer night . . . and her. Thank you for helping me find that long lost memory., Carol.