Sultry

her senses seduce  
on a sultry Saturday afternoon
adorning an alluring mix
of cream and  blue
a laced vision anew
holding in her luscious dew
 
my mouth waters at the tease
as my only desire is to please
and to pleasure the view
she has my full attention
as my check has a blushing hue
 
she floats free  
a flirtatious feather in my sky
I feel her and all her elegance
will she stay or will she blow on by

I wonder, I wander, I cry

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2023 6:35:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one Ditto what Jan commented

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2023 4:02:00 PM

sensual and sultry, beautiful in its sadness. it is SO good to see you back Tim, hope the family are all fine:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Bell

Date: 8/13/2023 8:39:00 AM

Something tells me she's gone, but who knows, maybe another time she'll stay.

Lin Lane

Date: 8/12/2023 2:14:00 PM

If she can read your thoughts she’d be foolish not to stray, and you not to prevent the feather from blowing away. Your sensual subtleness has lost none of its allure. ;-)