Sullen Whispers

i watch the eagle soar
through this crimson hued sky
as i inhale 
this sultry air
and gasp

a new day is dawning
yet my thoughts linger
as i clutch memories
of yesterday's now past

i can't grasp these thoughts
twisting through my head
like vines on old trees
as they hold on tight
choking words
like a noose
around neck

i stutter
through sullen whispers
dropping to my knees
as i clasp my hands
in prayer

looking for answers
i'll never find

i hear the screams
of this eagle
echo in my head
as he lands
on the bough
above

silence breaks
like twigs
and minds
snapping
as a rabbit
scurries for cover
in the thicket nearby
knowing death 
was not his fate
this day

i hear the trickle
of a stream
in the distance
as tears trace
my face
wondering why
it was yours
as memories
glide on by

June 29, 2021
Grasp Poetry Contest
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La France Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Prompt - Grasp - Challenge! I liked your poem a lot and your use of the required words ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 2:00 PM
Back with congratulations on this win. A really beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day with your win.......................
Kauffman Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Sandy, congratulations for this poem of intense color and images - brilliant as the sunrise! It is so wonderful to have you back in the "soup." Your writes inspire and motivate. Many blessings to you and a hug!
Alex Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:05 AM
i hear the trickle of a stream in the distance as tears trace my face wondering why it was yours as memories glide on by Beautifully Written. Congratulations!
Proxenos Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:44 AM
Sandy I often thought about you and wondered why you had been absent from soup for some while and was elated when I saw your comment on one of my recent poems. Hope you are well dear friend. As usual, your intense creativity evident. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 12:00 PM
A beautiful story/write. "Love It" So glad you are back. You were missed. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Ligon Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 8:05 AM
Nice use of the required words. This flows really well.
Gondolf Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 3:54 AM
Good to see you back, Sandy, and your wonderful writing has not lost a beat. Best of luck in the contest. I hope all is well in your world. Hugs, John
Edmonds  Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Sullen whispers they may be, yet your thoughts are described beautifully Sandra. You’ve weaved the obligatory words in wonderfully. Best wishes… Hugs, Belle
Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 6:42 AM
- Wooow, Sandra ... this is excellent ! - Hope everything is well with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 5:44 AM
You are a master at creating these images Sandy. Given words blend with ease in this emotive depiction. You have to win BIG with this.
Cunningham Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Sandra, you used the allocated words well, best of luck. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 12:53 AM
Glad you are writing again. Your poetry is always top class. Best for a win. Hugs.
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 10:59 PM
Brilliant writing, Sandra, your free verse simply flows, great use of the given words:) Eagle is generally used as a positive metaphor, but you have uniquely crafted your own meaning:) awesome:)
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Superb entry for contest. I could feel your emotions. All the best
Wolf Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Memorable! How you segued from the eagle and darkling images to the river's end is remarkable! Kudos, Gershon
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