Sullen Whispers

i watch the eagle soar
through this crimson hued sky
as i inhale 
this sultry air
and gasp

a new day is dawning
yet my thoughts linger
as i clutch memories
of yesterday's now past

i can't grasp these thoughts
twisting through my head
like vines on old trees
as they hold on tight
choking words
like a noose
around neck

i stutter
through sullen whispers
dropping to my knees
as i clasp my hands
in prayer

looking for answers
i'll never find

i hear the screams
of this eagle
echo in my head
as he lands
on the bough
above

silence breaks
like twigs
and minds
snapping
as a rabbit
scurries for cover
in the thicket nearby
knowing death 
was not his fate
this day

i hear the trickle
of a stream
in the distance
as tears trace
my face
wondering why
it was yours
as memories
glide on by

June 29, 2021
Grasp Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 7/16/2021 11:41:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Prompt - Grasp - Challenge! I liked your poem a lot and your use of the required words ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 7/13/2021 2:00:00 PM
Back with congratulations on this win. A really beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day with your win.......................
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Date: 7/12/2021 10:56:00 AM
Sandy, congratulations for this poem of intense color and images - brilliant as the sunrise! It is so wonderful to have you back in the "soup." Your writes inspire and motivate. Many blessings to you and a hug!
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:05:00 AM
i hear the trickle of a stream in the distance as tears trace my face wondering why it was yours as memories glide on by Beautifully Written. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/4/2021 12:44:00 AM
Sandy I often thought about you and wondered why you had been absent from soup for some while and was elated when I saw your comment on one of my recent poems. Hope you are well dear friend. As usual, your intense creativity evident. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/1/2021 12:00:00 PM
A beautiful story/write. "Love It" So glad you are back. You were missed. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 7/1/2021 8:05:00 AM
Nice use of the required words. This flows really well.
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Date: 7/1/2021 3:54:00 AM
Good to see you back, Sandy, and your wonderful writing has not lost a beat. Best of luck in the contest. I hope all is well in your world. Hugs, John
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Date: 6/30/2021 10:35:00 AM
Sullen whispers they may be, yet your thoughts are described beautifully Sandra. You’ve weaved the obligatory words in wonderfully. Best wishes… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 6/30/2021 6:42:00 AM
- Wooow, Sandra ... this is excellent ! - Hope everything is well with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/30/2021 5:44:00 AM
You are a master at creating these images Sandy. Given words blend with ease in this emotive depiction. You have to win BIG with this.
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Date: 6/30/2021 5:43:00 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Sandra, you used the allocated words well, best of luck. Tom
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Date: 6/30/2021 12:53:00 AM
Glad you are writing again. Your poetry is always top class. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:59:00 PM
Brilliant writing, Sandra, your free verse simply flows, great use of the given words:) Eagle is generally used as a positive metaphor, but you have uniquely crafted your own meaning:) awesome:)
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Date: 6/29/2021 9:31:00 PM
Superb entry for contest. I could feel your emotions. All the best
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Date: 6/29/2021 8:03:00 PM
Memorable! How you segued from the eagle and darkling images to the river's end is remarkable! Kudos, Gershon
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