Sukiyaki: Autumn Dreams

These past few days it seems 
you visit more my dreams
of springtime love, 
yet I feel the cold inside my skin
I reach out to you, 
but wake up to a new
dawn of another day without you.

The autumn air seeps through 
the warmest sight in view
I shiver then, 
I go back to those days again.
Do you think the same, 
of frolics in the rain?
Sweet memories will always haunt me.

Will I have one more glimpse of you
before our time trickles down our last sinew.

Wishes still do come true, 
now I’m in front of you
We’re still both young, bolder, 
more self-assured this time.
Vague at the back of my mind, 
gasping, I push the thought aside.
You’ve come to visit in my dreams.

Wishes still do come true, 
now I’m in front of you
We’re still both young, bolder, 
more self-assured this time.
Vague at the back of my mind, 
gasping, I push the thought aside.
You’ve come to visit in my dreams.
You’ve come to visit in my dreams.



** It should be sung to the melody of the song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C35DrtPlUbc

SUKIYAKI Contest
Sponsor: James Rogers
23 August 2015
image credit: Stafford Lakay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Richards Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 9:57 AM
I couldn't help but listen to the music while reading your poem.......what a terrific match !! Well done, Kim......a big congratulations !!
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Back to congratulate you on your poem, way to go girl Hugs Eve
A. Sharma Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Congrats on ur superb win Kim with this awesome write!
Guzzi Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Old lovers do- so lucky for us! Light & Love
A  Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Lovely win Kim... SKAT
Terry Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 12:59 PM
Hello, Kim and congrats on your win. I looked for a Sukiyaki poem from you early Sunday in your list of poems but somehow missed it. So glad you placed well and it is beautiful. It seems like the music conveyed the melancholy of loss to all of us. Is the music still playing in your head or is that just me? Lol .hugs:)) Jan
Muideen Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:40 AM
What an excellence write, your lyric flows smoothly and eloquence, a great write KIM..........A.M.
Villarosa Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 2:25 AM
Your poem flows with sweet pursuit of romantic love, even in dreams it goes deeper into a genuine affection. It is clear from where the source of happiness is coming from. Love leaves a lot to wish for. 7 (^_^) Noel.
Callus Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 8:42 AM
I haven't listened to the music yet, but these lyrics are lovely! A romantic soul thrives on dreams and memories. #7 Hugs // paul
Trifiatis Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:30 AM
A melodic composition of the heart that leaves the soul in ecstasy, dear Kim. Good luck and a seven to go with.
Laurie Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 11:04 PM
G'day Kim... a nice set of reflective lyrics and good luck in the contest Kim - Lindsay
Meade Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Your words make the music come alive -- A wonderful poem -- may all your dreams be filled with wild abandonment of love and your waking moments with warm embraces . . . 7
La France Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Kim, beautifully penned words to accompany the haunting music A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, tattered pages
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 10:33 AM
I am seeing some really great poems inspired by this music. Gosh, you did wonderfully with it. It must have a tinge of sadness to it. I really need to take a listen!
Roper Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Wonderful write good luck in the contest and a 7+ from me. Hugs eve
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 7:10 AM
- A beautiful lyric, dear Kim - I wish you a nice Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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