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Tania Kitchin's A Romantic or Celestial Crystalline, 9/15/2025

Suits His Smile

Periwinkle gown, grace and style.
Embrace, electric; she suits his smile.

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Krishnanand Guptar

September 22, 2025 at 11:18 AM

Congratulations, poet friend, on your win in this contest, with a lovely write on the grace of electric smile. Wishing you a smiling day.

Kim Rodrigues

September 22, 2025 at 1:30 PM

Thank you, my friend! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 22, 2025 at 7:27 AM

- Lovely, Kim :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

September 22, 2025 at 1:30 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise,

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

September 21, 2025 at 8:56 PM

Surely! As your poem as well sweetens my smile.

Kim Rodrigues

September 22, 2025 at 5:42 AM

Truly, thank you! I love this figurine my husband gave me and thought how can I give it justice with just a few words. Bless you!

Tania Kitchin

September 21, 2025 at 4:21 PM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming poem.

Kim Rodrigues

September 22, 2025 at 5:42 AM

Thank you, Tania!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

September 21, 2025 at 1:58 PM

Lovely Kim! Congratulations on your win :-) Have a wonderful day ~ hugs AA

Kim Rodrigues

September 21, 2025 at 3:13 PM

Thank you, Abdullah! <3

Paige Hind

September 18, 2025 at 3:29 PM

That's original- "embrace, electric" suiting a smile ! <3

Kim Rodrigues

September 21, 2025 at 3:13 PM

Thank you, dear Paige! I tried to be as succinct and expressive as possible…took me a bit!

Valsa George

September 16, 2025 at 8:47 PM

There is harmony in their appearance and in the feeling of love. They will make a good pair. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

September 17, 2025 at 6:33 AM

I believe so :)

Gershon Wolf

September 16, 2025 at 7:56 PM

Love the imagery, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

September 16, 2025 at 8:14 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Danny Derden

September 16, 2025 at 8:00 AM

This is tender and cinematic—each word chosen with care. The imagery sparkles, and the final line lands with emotional resonance. You’ve captured a moment of connection that feels timeless and true. Beautifully distilled and effortlessly romantic.

Kim Rodrigues

September 16, 2025 at 11:54 AM

Thank you so much, Danny!