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Suicide Wonders

I walk Dead or Alive I may look Alive on the outside But on the inside Im dead Some can see Past the mask I put on Everyday To cover up My true emotions But do they say Anything to anyone Of course not They want me dead As much as I want Myself to be dead And that Is truly a lot I know People do not Want me around And Im fine with that I get it So just think When you hear That someone in Your school Has commited suicide Think Wonder If you were A reason why They commited suicide And if you know That do didnt Think again Because you Could have done something To help Save that life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/22/2009 1:31:00 PM
very well written, if you know someone who commited suicide, you wonder all these things. keep writing ------Ell
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:26:00 PM
some of us are closer than anyone knows!
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Date: 11/16/2009 4:10:00 PM
Most people that are close to sucide are very good at concealing the fact. Nice write to remind us that someone close to us could be that close. Keep writing. Sara
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