Suicide Prevention

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I was- suicidal when my baby died- possessed with death when my love left a name engraved buried deep and went into a dark pit running from life happiness was gone self-murder thoughts filled my days I was locked in what was and not reality the devil whispered wicked plots in my head diabolic hellish hari-kiri plans then God spoke and calmed my soul so I crawled into the light embraced the world again and vowed to help those lost as I was- with no path but death in their future I am a listener giver of hope a friend when they are full of nothingness- ________________________ September 8, 2017 Free Verse/Suicide Prevention Copyright Protected, ID 938275 Written for the contest, Suicide Prevention Month sponsor, Laura Loo Second Place

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John Michaels

Date: 10/7/2017 5:48:00 AM

Can really feel the pain of your loss seeping through this poignant write :( . Congrats on your well-deserved win. Regards, John.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/21/2017 4:21:00 AM

The pain of losing a child can never leave us, I feel your pain beyond belief. great poem and thank you and congrats :)

Curtis Johnson

Date: 9/19/2017 8:00:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Broken Wings. I like this poem; It paints the picture very convincingly and revealing. Blessings.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 9/12/2017 7:59:00 AM

wow breath-taking dear,well written that one sees it happening. Hope u won it. Kudos

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/9/2017 8:11:00 AM

Eloquent, impacting, deeply touched I offer you hugs and love xomo

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/9/2017 4:40:00 AM

This is a very expressive write my friend! This poem is full of emotion and certainly one that gives off hope! I really enjoyed reading your amazing piece this morning! This is a harmonious poem, Great Work!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/8/2017 9:33:00 PM

Excellent! Love the hopefulness.