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Suicide Masterpiece

Suicide Masterpiece

Sweatdrop
On top
Trigger pop
Written note
All I got
Hang knot
Body rot
Suicide cop

I hope not
Cry out loud
I think not
Body's hot
I am too proud
I am loved a lot
Rooftop.
Suicide bride

Heavy rain
Your game 
the same
Trapped shame
Gone insane
Who's to blame
Red stain
Suicide rain

Addictive dope
Needle hope
Poison taste
Drowning beer
Gunshot
Painless fear
Powder nose
Suicide dose

Razor blades
Flame stare
Pain fades
Sadden tear
Candle wax
Smoke dare
Burn down
Suicide flare

No bluff
No name
War zone
Innocent prey
Soul blown
Cry all day
Set mind
Suicide bomb

Terrorist 
traffic jam
Plane jack
Headstrong
Help protect
Customs wrong
Dead plot
Suicide stop

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stop the suicide 

by:-)

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Maria Sharon Moemise

Date: 5/20/2015 4:51:00 PM

Unique writing style. Great reading material. I enjoy reading your work.

Joseph May

Date: 8/7/2013 3:08:00 PM

well crafted poem for the topic Linda....congrats on your win

Donna Jones

Date: 8/6/2013 7:06:00 PM

Wow....a lot to think about in this one...read a couple times...the lines that really got to me...red stain...suicide rain...cause I actually thought about what a mess I would leave when I tried to well ya know....congratulations Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2013 2:43:00 PM

big Congrats with this one in the contest, PD!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/5/2013 8:15:00 PM

yeah me.... LOL, PD

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/11/2013 4:09:00 AM

Hello, Is this the lady with the cherry on top, mmmmm looks delicious lol. Hi my Sweet Dark Friend, just looking at another of yours. Suicide, always a ponderance and sadness no matter the circumstances. Very good write on a difficult subject. Take care Richard.

David Scott

Date: 11/28/2012 7:11:00 AM

cool pattern and subject i can relate to as have been in this situation many a time in the past xx davidscott

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/29/2012 11:55:00 PM

This is a creative write here..I love the different scenarios of suicide..very in tuned with each of them.

Karen Deeks

Date: 6/12/2012 5:07:00 AM

A real top notch write of all the possibilities of taking and doing away with, then followed by the fight for life when someone else decides to take a life which is not theres (or maybe including theres) suicide bomb just seems a disgusting title for someone whos dragging unsuspecting innocents with him... karen

Michael Smith

Date: 4/10/2012 11:16:00 AM

Very strong stuff here. I know suicide well as going boy I discovered my mother when I got home early from school. It leaves a hole in your heart that only the love of the Savior can come close to filling.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/7/2011 2:20:00 PM

Powerful piece indeed, my friend

Gary Fields

Date: 8/13/2011 8:30:00 AM

Dear Destroyer XX; I know that you can do this all day. But you know that in life their really is time for play! Good Tide-ing: Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Oh' Keep the write-up, up! Kiss, Kiss, Kiss-up! Do it lightly and lively.

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/27/2010 6:59:00 AM

Outstanding write P.D. as usual! Your construction and creativity of such difficult topics continues to amaze me! You have been a FAV from the start. Thank you kindly for your words they mean so much to me. I am so happy you are feeling better; I prayed for you! So nice to know you...Your PS friend...Lay

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/26/2010 3:31:00 AM

this is very telling. especially about where the depresion comes from. john h loving iii

Audonus Taylor

Date: 11/6/2010 7:07:00 PM

Mad props for this one P.D. Touchy subject but the structure and message with your words make it hard not to read and enjoy. As always, you keep becoming my favorite all over again. GReat work my friend, GREAT!

Amy Sullivan

Date: 10/29/2010 6:28:00 AM

WOW! Truly brilliant!! (";) I love it! amzie

Jasmine Whipps

Date: 7/31/2010 5:52:00 PM

This write is amazingly deep. I've known ppl who struggle with this. You look at it from an angle I dare not think until now. Well done p.d you put alot on my mind.Thanks for the recent comments, continue with the great writes. Love, Jasmine

Shannon Farlouis

Date: 7/27/2010 2:37:00 PM

Perfectly put together, a very interesting piece. Great rhythm and beat.

Dark Angel

Date: 7/17/2010 3:11:00 PM

Another amazing poem! I love the format and the way it rhymes :] perfect!!!!! Love dark angel!!

Susan Mills

Date: 7/15/2010 9:28:00 PM

Street smart poem with a genuine flare. Glad the suicide turned around and came undone at the end. Love, Susan

Anthony Beesley

Date: 7/11/2010 2:58:00 PM

LOVED IT. IT HAS GREUSOME GHETTO QUALITY. IT BENDS REALITY THE SUPERNATURAL THE TANGIBLE AND THE EMOTIONAL GET TWISTED INTO A 3 CORD STRONG SCARLET ROPE HOPE CHOKES AS IT'S SWINGING IN THE NOOSE. I LOVE THIS POEM YOU TURNED THE BEAST LOOSE

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 7/9/2010 6:57:00 AM

There's an enormous talent for being able to link into the suicidal mindset from all the angles you've done here. I came in expecting a self loathing angle only but you know how to enter all these distraught minds and give your interpretation with such few words. I'm a fan of the form, less words, more thoughts and interpretations. Also I'm curious about your choice of pseudonym. What exactly does a Poet Destroyer do? Does he destroy other poets? That'd be awesome:)

Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 7/3/2010 12:01:00 PM

Wow this is an epic piece! I love it, however don't try it in real life, please lol *RJK