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Suicide Masterpiece

Suicide Masterpiece

Sweatdrop
On top
Trigger pop
Written note
All I got
Hang knot
Body rot
Suicide cop

I hope not
Cry out loud
I think not
Body's hot
I am too proud
I am loved a lot
Rooftop.
Suicide bride

Heavy rain
Your game 
the same
Trapped shame
Gone insane
Who's to blame
Red stain
Suicide rain

Addictive dope
Needle hope
Poison taste
Drowning beer
Gunshot
Painless fear
Powder nose
Suicide dose

Razor blades
Flame stare
Pain fades
Sadden tear
Candle wax
Smoke dare
Burn down
Suicide flare

No bluff
No name
War zone
Innocent prey
Soul blown
Cry all day
Set mind
Suicide bomb

Terrorist 
traffic jam
Plane jack
Headstrong
Help protect
Customs wrong
Dead plot
Suicide stop

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stop the suicide 

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Maria Sharon Moemise May 20, 2015 at 4:51 PM Unique writing style. Great reading material. I enjoy reading your work.

Joseph May August 7, 2013 at 3:08 PM well crafted poem for the topic Linda....congrats on your win

Donna Jones August 6, 2013 at 7:06 PM Wow....a lot to think about in this one...read a couple times...the lines that really got to me...red stain...suicide rain...cause I actually thought about what a mess I would leave when I tried to well ya know....congratulations Linda

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2013 at 2:43 PM big Congrats with this one in the contest, PD!

Poet Destroyer A August 5, 2013 at 8:15 PM yeah me.... LOL, PD

Richard D Seal April 11, 2013 at 4:09 AM Hello, Is this the lady with the cherry on top, mmmmm looks delicious lol. Hi my Sweet Dark Friend, just looking at another of yours. Suicide, always a ponderance and sadness no matter the circumstances. Very good write on a difficult subject. Take care Richard.

David Scott November 28, 2012 at 7:11 AM cool pattern and subject i can relate to as have been in this situation many a time in the past xx davidscott

Pace Ink-U-Script June 29, 2012 at 11:55 PM This is a creative write here..I love the different scenarios of suicide..very in tuned with each of them.

Karen Deeks June 12, 2012 at 5:07 AM A real top notch write of all the possibilities of taking and doing away with, then followed by the fight for life when someone else decides to take a life which is not theres (or maybe including theres) suicide bomb just seems a disgusting title for someone whos dragging unsuspecting innocents with him... karen

Michael Smith April 10, 2012 at 11:16 AM Very strong stuff here. I know suicide well as going boy I discovered my mother when I got home early from school. It leaves a hole in your heart that only the love of the Savior can come close to filling.

Jack Horne December 7, 2011 at 2:20 PM Powerful piece indeed, my friend

Gary Fields August 13, 2011 at 8:30 AM Dear Destroyer XX; I know that you can do this all day. But you know that in life their really is time for play! Good Tide-ing: Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Oh' Keep the write-up, up! Kiss, Kiss, Kiss-up! Do it lightly and lively.

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway December 27, 2010 at 6:59 AM Outstanding write P.D. as usual! Your construction and creativity of such difficult topics continues to amaze me! You have been a FAV from the start. Thank you kindly for your words they mean so much to me. I am so happy you are feeling better; I prayed for you! So nice to know you...Your PS friend...Lay

John Loving Iii December 26, 2010 at 3:31 AM this is very telling. especially about where the depresion comes from. john h loving iii

Audonus Taylor November 6, 2010 at 7:07 PM Mad props for this one P.D. Touchy subject but the structure and message with your words make it hard not to read and enjoy. As always, you keep becoming my favorite all over again. GReat work my friend, GREAT!

Amy Sullivan October 29, 2010 at 6:28 AM WOW! Truly brilliant!! (";) I love it! amzie

Jasmine Whipps July 31, 2010 at 5:52 PM This write is amazingly deep. I've known ppl who struggle with this. You look at it from an angle I dare not think until now. Well done p.d you put alot on my mind.Thanks for the recent comments, continue with the great writes. Love, Jasmine

Shannon Farlouis July 27, 2010 at 2:37 PM Perfectly put together, a very interesting piece. Great rhythm and beat.

Dark Angel July 17, 2010 at 3:11 PM Another amazing poem! I love the format and the way it rhymes :] perfect!!!!! Love dark angel!!

Susan Mills July 15, 2010 at 9:28 PM Street smart poem with a genuine flare. Glad the suicide turned around and came undone at the end. Love, Susan

Anthony Beesley July 11, 2010 at 2:58 PM LOVED IT. IT HAS GREUSOME GHETTO QUALITY. IT BENDS REALITY THE SUPERNATURAL THE TANGIBLE AND THE EMOTIONAL GET TWISTED INTO A 3 CORD STRONG SCARLET ROPE HOPE CHOKES AS IT'S SWINGING IN THE NOOSE. I LOVE THIS POEM YOU TURNED THE BEAST LOOSE

Yoni Dvorkis July 9, 2010 at 6:57 AM There's an enormous talent for being able to link into the suicidal mindset from all the angles you've done here. I came in expecting a self loathing angle only but you know how to enter all these distraught minds and give your interpretation with such few words. I'm a fan of the form, less words, more thoughts and interpretations. Also I'm curious about your choice of pseudonym. What exactly does a Poet Destroyer do? Does he destroy other poets? That'd be awesome:)

Richard-Jamaal Keen July 3, 2010 at 12:01 PM Wow this is an epic piece! I love it, however don't try it in real life, please lol *RJK

Jo Bien July 1, 2010 at 10:53 PM excellent!! goes deep! JB

Mike Butler June 28, 2010 at 10:25 AM Nicely written! Love the rhyme and the ending. Thank you for your recent comments. Take care, -Mike

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