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Suicide Masterpiece

Suicide Masterpiece Sweatdrop On top Trigger pop Written note All I got Hang knot Body rot Suicide cop I hope not Cry out loud I think not Body's hot I am too proud I am loved a lot Rooftop. Suicide bride Heavy rain Your game the same Trapped shame Gone insane Who's to blame Red stain Suicide rain Addictive dope Needle hope Poison taste Drowning beer Gunshot Painless fear Powder nose Suicide dose Razor blades Flame stare Pain fades Sadden tear Candle wax Smoke dare Burn down Suicide flare No bluff No name War zone Innocent prey Soul blown Cry all day Set mind Suicide bomb Terrorist traffic jam Plane jack Headstrong Help protect Customs wrong Dead plot Suicide stop ------ stop the suicide by:-)

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Date: 5/20/2015 4:51:00 PM
Unique writing style. Great reading material. I enjoy reading your work.
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Date: 8/7/2013 3:08:00 PM
well crafted poem for the topic Linda....congrats on your win
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Date: 8/6/2013 7:06:00 PM
Wow....a lot to think about in this one...read a couple times...the lines that really got to me...red stain...suicide rain...cause I actually thought about what a mess I would leave when I tried to well ya know....congratulations Linda
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Date: 8/6/2013 2:43:00 PM
big Congrats with this one in the contest, PD!
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:15:00 PM
yeah me.... LOL, PD
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 4/11/2013 4:09:00 AM
Hello, Is this the lady with the cherry on top, mmmmm looks delicious lol. Hi my Sweet Dark Friend, just looking at another of yours. Suicide, always a ponderance and sadness no matter the circumstances. Very good write on a difficult subject. Take care Richard.
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Date: 11/28/2012 7:11:00 AM
cool pattern and subject i can relate to as have been in this situation many a time in the past xx davidscott
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:55:00 PM
This is a creative write here..I love the different scenarios of suicide..very in tuned with each of them.
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Date: 6/12/2012 5:07:00 AM
A real top notch write of all the possibilities of taking and doing away with, then followed by the fight for life when someone else decides to take a life which is not theres (or maybe including theres) suicide bomb just seems a disgusting title for someone whos dragging unsuspecting innocents with him... karen
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Date: 4/10/2012 11:16:00 AM
Very strong stuff here. I know suicide well as going boy I discovered my mother when I got home early from school. It leaves a hole in your heart that only the love of the Savior can come close to filling.
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Date: 12/7/2011 2:20:00 PM
Powerful piece indeed, my friend
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Date: 8/13/2011 8:30:00 AM
Dear Destroyer XX; I know that you can do this all day. But you know that in life their really is time for play! Good Tide-ing: Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Oh' Keep the write-up, up! Kiss, Kiss, Kiss-up! Do it lightly and lively.
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:59:00 AM
Outstanding write P.D. as usual! Your construction and creativity of such difficult topics continues to amaze me! You have been a FAV from the start. Thank you kindly for your words they mean so much to me. I am so happy you are feeling better; I prayed for you! So nice to know you...Your PS friend...Lay
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Date: 12/26/2010 3:31:00 AM
this is very telling. especially about where the depresion comes from. john h loving iii
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:07:00 PM
Mad props for this one P.D. Touchy subject but the structure and message with your words make it hard not to read and enjoy. As always, you keep becoming my favorite all over again. GReat work my friend, GREAT!
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Date: 10/29/2010 6:28:00 AM
WOW! Truly brilliant!! (";) I love it! amzie
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Date: 10/18/2010 12:43:00 PM
i really like this one very unique , i enjoyed reading it thanks fr the connetb nellla
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:52:00 PM
This write is amazingly deep. I've known ppl who struggle with this. You look at it from an angle I dare not think until now. Well done p.d you put alot on my mind.Thanks for the recent comments, continue with the great writes. Love, Jasmine
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Date: 7/27/2010 2:37:00 PM
Perfectly put together, a very interesting piece. Great rhythm and beat.
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Date: 7/17/2010 3:11:00 PM
Another amazing poem! I love the format and the way it rhymes :] perfect!!!!! Love dark angel!!
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:28:00 PM
Street smart poem with a genuine flare. Glad the suicide turned around and came undone at the end. Love, Susan
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Date: 7/11/2010 2:58:00 PM
LOVED IT. IT HAS GREUSOME GHETTO QUALITY. IT BENDS REALITY THE SUPERNATURAL THE TANGIBLE AND THE EMOTIONAL GET TWISTED INTO A 3 CORD STRONG SCARLET ROPE HOPE CHOKES AS IT'S SWINGING IN THE NOOSE. I LOVE THIS POEM YOU TURNED THE BEAST LOOSE
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Date: 7/9/2010 6:57:00 AM
There's an enormous talent for being able to link into the suicidal mindset from all the angles you've done here. I came in expecting a self loathing angle only but you know how to enter all these distraught minds and give your interpretation with such few words. I'm a fan of the form, less words, more thoughts and interpretations. Also I'm curious about your choice of pseudonym. What exactly does a Poet Destroyer do? Does he destroy other poets? That'd be awesome:)
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:01:00 PM
Wow this is an epic piece! I love it, however don't try it in real life, please lol *RJK
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