Suicide

R.I.P.
they say he died so young
frankly i can't believe he lasted 
as long as he did
i had no fear of death
i did alot of good trip
had some peeks thru the darkness
saw the other side
they said eat right work out
get plenty of rest
i say drink until you black out
get a lung full of that fire smoke
uppers and downers
freak out your brain
freak out squares for a bonus
do your own thing
smash your watch
your hip on time
remember i love you 
peace go with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Puddifoot Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 5:20 AM
poignant poem, suicide is such a tragedy for all concerned...
Cox Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:04 AM
very true thank you for reading and sharing
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