Suicide

Suicide is just an escape,
from a lonely world full of hate.
In this world there's no love and friendship,
it's full of tears and hatred.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 27, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Suicide has hit many a family, so tragic. I also wrote a poem called Suicide Mind. I would love to hear your comments on it, nice script Erica, James
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May 21, 2009 at 10:54 PM
You convey well the thoughts of one contemplating suicide, Erica. But if people who feel this way manage to hang on, love and friendship will enter their lives eventually. Bless you for sharing this heartfelt write, and I hope you are not painting a self-portrait. Love, Carolyn
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