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Suicidal Notes

My misery knows no bounds my sorrows keep piling my despair has become too obvious my flowing tears hinder my sight In my distress,i see no one the agony of getting left behind has caused me to bail out on life I work double of the normal but i get half my rewards I'm surrounded by riches but my pocket is a dry well When i try to take just a step Obstacles spring up from nowhere Mama nature has shown me its back She has placed her fat ass on me Forward has become an irony with nothing to gain and a lot to loose I've become an overstayed visitor in this God forsaken entity Tonight,i'll bow and take the plunge into the eternal abyss of damnation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/7/2010 9:26:00 AM
great! thank God! thanks for your wonderful comments. I have been preparing for NYSC that's why I took so long to respond. thanks once again,. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:14:00 AM
This was a personal state of mind at a point in time(but that was then).....But then,why do people think,a poet is talking about himself when he writes....most times,i just write
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Date: 10/4/2010 1:41:00 PM
Very depressive thoughts , Kolapo
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Date: 10/4/2010 10:20:00 AM
intense pain. hopefully this is not about you. i think many of us, writers too, have deep feelings of highs and lows - the task in life is to find the middle ground, where everything is level, more understandable. you are not alone at PoetrySoup. great write, thank you, chuck
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