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Suicidal Heart

Shattered in pieces the tender heart
Fixed with the healing that brings time
Rises from the nowhere world
Beats with the hidden scars
Subsaning the pain
Suicided
Past feelings
Killed love
Beat







For You Broke My Heart Poetry Contest
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2-7-2017
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Date: 3/6/2017 5:37:00 AM
Hi Nayda...It's a sad poem and with a good ending. Regards. Mpho Kgaswane.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2017 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Mpho.
Date: 2/8/2017 3:31:00 AM
"Shattered in pieces the tender heart" - a very painful line, Nayda:) well done:)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/8/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 2/7/2017 11:48:00 PM
It's easy to break...but hard to heal...great verse Nayda...god bless...^WW^
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/8/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you WW. God bless you.

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