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Suicidal Heart

Shattered in pieces the tender heart Fixed with the healing that brings time Rises from the nowhere world Beats with the hidden scars Subsaning the pain Suicided Past feelings Killed love Beat For You Broke My Heart Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nicola Byrne 2-7-2017 Fifth Place

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Date: 3/6/2017 5:37:00 AM
Hi Nayda...It's a sad poem and with a good ending. Regards. Mpho Kgaswane.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2017 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Mpho.
Date: 2/8/2017 3:31:00 AM
"Shattered in pieces the tender heart" - a very painful line, Nayda:) well done:)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/8/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 2/7/2017 11:48:00 PM
It's easy to break...but hard to heal...great verse Nayda...god bless...^WW^
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/8/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you WW. God bless you.

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