Notes About The Poem

sugar, sweet

YOU ...
small, furry,
soft, warm, joyful,
sweet little creature,
came to me in a shadow ...
a time when my heart ran cold,
kicked far down the road by sorrow,
and lost as any hobo without a compass.
I had given hopes and dreams their pink slips ...
shown their sorry, deceitful little selves the door,
and told them where to put their accursed optimism.

Then YOU ...
you who had
been so neglected
and abused by others
of my race, others who had
seen kittens as something less
than themselves ... something for
their twisted amusement ... something
meant for the focus of their ire and hatred
and evil intent ... something at the mercy of the
dominion granted them by their so-called "acumen" ...

YOU, Sugar ...
had come with
such a simple name,
a name I had every intent
of changing to something far
more artistic, or worldly, or cute,
or extravagant, and yet as the time
passed those first days with me, as you
worked your gentle, loving, tender, amiable,
precious, good-natured way deep into my heart,
it was more-and-more evident that whoever had given

YOU your moniker,
had somehow, through
their sinister intent, STILL
been unmistakably affected
by your pure and precious spirit,
and had out-done my best intentions
and wholly self-lauded creativity, (as well
as trumped my attempts to attach a name to
you that others would feel obligated to soak with
feigned praise), by giving you a sweet epithet which,
in its absolute simplicity and virtue, was nothing less than

PERFECT.
YOU, my sweet
little Sugar, abide
the very essence of
your name, and you have
not only sweetened my days
beyond measure, but have saved
my life in ways that I'll never be able to
impart you. Who knew that the dark clouds
of my heart would be rent by such a fuzzy little
face of sunshine - that all I needed was a little bit of

YOU.





~ 2nd Place ~  in the "My Companion And Close Friend That Never Complains" Poetry Contest, Eve Roper, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 5th Place ~  in the "Just A Little Bit Of Sugar Poetry Contest", Debbie Guzzi, Judge & Sponsor.
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Craig Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 12:41 PM
Very compassionate and hart warming poem. - Gregory
Barden Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 4:44 AM
That's very kind of you Michael - thank you kindly, my friend! :o)
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 8:13 AM
Thank you for entering my contest, Greg. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Barden Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 4:44 AM
Thank you so very much, Eve, this poem is very special to me for obvious reasons, as is Sugar - the sweetest soul I've ever know. I'd be lost without her - I'm so pleased you liked my poem about her! Blessings! :o) <3
White Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Masah an-Nur Greg :)
Barden Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Buddy! :o)
White Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 4:46 AM
Oh boy..... is this beautiful! I feel so much feelings I cannot explain (or yes I can, but I won't) just this. Wonderful poetry, shukran!
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 1:58 AM
Thank you VERY much Darren ... your opinion means a lot to me! Sabah alkhyr!
Neumann Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 1:34 AM
This is beautiful. Te way things are, when they are the way they are. Congratulations, Kai
Barden Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 2:11 AM
Thank you, Kai, very much ... I greatly appreciate your comments!
Hamilton Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 4:11 PM
Great write. Greg, great win, you're on a roll Sir!
Barden Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Thanks you kindly, John, very kind words - this one just flowed ... I think the ones we write directly from the heart tend to be the least amount of work, for the most part. Appreciated, my friend. :)
Inman Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 12:46 PM
A wonderfully touching write Greg.
Barden Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Thank you so much, James - very much appreciated, my friend!
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